Ruby

Wonder if anyone's still around, it's been dead silent these last 2 years 

My writing structure is basically
          
          -Name chapter
          
          -Write based on the chapter name
          
          -Add Car Term Dictionary
          
          -Fix all grammar errors and add details
          
          It's a mess but I've managed to squeeze 6 chapters outta my beginner writer brain.
          
          I'd like lots of feedback on this since it's my first story I'm actually putting the effort into. It would help further improve the quality. Try not being an elitist asshole about it and point it out plainly as to not confuse me. 
          
          Hope I can write chapter 7 at some point.

I'm not sure if I'm the only one noticing this but my story seems to end it's minor conflicts rather quickly and it's kinda strange to me looking back

Bang Dream! Sparkling Star has a theme I've chosen that is associated with the story's main protagonist and the message he has to learn despite all his past and future struggles.
          
          Be Somebody by Thousand Foot Krutch
          
          https://youtu.be/PGSvITdmrXM

Happy birthday to Rokka and Me

The following are the titles for the next chapters of Sparkling Star
          
          4 - Unforgettable Moment, Sparking Feeling
          
          5 - Daily Struggle, Sparkling Reprieve
          
          6 - The Downhill Battle, Sparkling Conclusion
          
          7 - Reputation Revealed, Sparkling Answer 

I hope this rewriting of Sparkling Star is up to snuff 

Chapter 1 of Sparkling Star was rewritten almost from the ground up, it's getting updated

Been a hot minute,.just know I'm basically rewriting this story to have better grammar and overall improvements. So yeah that's why I've been absent from here

Feels like Sparkling Star Chapter 3 might be too long, I wouldn't know though...I just write