Ruby

Yeah I uploaded part 14 pretty late. Sorry for the silence, I'm kinda on and off on this platform so.... again forgive me.
          
          Hope you guys enjoyed what's out so far.

Ok, so I went a bit on a streak and the next 2 parts of Sparkling Star are finished. 
          
          Issue, part 11 is 3000 words and 12 is 4222 words.
          
          Hope that won't be an issue.

White Gold Day 5 has begun

Wonder if anyone's still around, it's been dead silent these last 2 years 

My writing structure is basically
          
          -Name chapter
          
          -Write based on the chapter name
          
          -Add Car Term Dictionary
          
          -Fix all grammar errors and add details
          
          It's a mess but I've managed to squeeze 6 chapters outta my beginner writer brain.
          
          I'd like lots of feedback on this since it's my first story I'm actually putting the effort into. It would help further improve the quality. Try not being an elitist asshole about it and point it out plainly as to not confuse me. 
          
          Hope I can write chapter 7 at some point.

I'm not sure if I'm the only one noticing this but my story seems to end it's minor conflicts rather quickly and it's kinda strange to me looking back

Happy birthday to Rokka and Me

The following are the titles for the next chapters of Sparkling Star
          
          4 - Unforgettable Moment, Sparking Feeling
          
          5 - Daily Struggle, Sparkling Reprieve
          
          6 - The Downhill Battle, Sparkling Conclusion
          
          7 - Reputation Revealed, Sparkling Answer 

I hope this rewriting of Sparkling Star is up to snuff 

Chapter 1 of Sparkling Star was rewritten almost from the ground up, it's getting updated