Nothisisnotokbutok

Map of the HRE 1254+Colorized
          	https://youtu.be/YokWof5VoTw
          	
          	Seizure warning maybe IDK.

T_2000_SGM

I got Eterix, Irfan, and Delta, want to come with me?

T_2000_SGM

@T_2000_SGM you know? Your following? Eterix and Delta3859? They're my friend so I thought we can too
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Nothisisnotokbutok

@T_2000_SGM I have no idea what you are on about, but k.
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Nothisisnotokbutok

I have found and witness something beyond even my comprehension!
          https://youtu.be/D2l0nvkpNuI

Nothisisnotokbutok

I am confusion, but not at the same time.
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Nothisisnotokbutok

Or are you giving an answer....
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Nothisisnotokbutok

Can you see the video?
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Delta3859

Yes, you have become Seija’s ultimate form!
          
          Also cool profile pic, i like it :D

Delta3859

@Nothisisnotokbutok I actually like that idea, though i'm still figuring out where to put that... maybe i'll put it in Gensokyo High after some time
            
            And what i was going to do is something like the Tournament of Power in Dragon Ball but with different challenges and a battle between them in the end
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Nothisisnotokbutok

@Delta3859 Then when teams drop down after 2-4 competitions then teams are dropped and we go on to straight one vs one arena combat.
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Nothisisnotokbutok

@Delta3859 Neeto, I was thinking that the tournament should start as teams and do objective based competitions voted on by the readers to make it interesting.
            Objective games like:
            Capture the flag
            King of the hill or castle
            Racing with skills inventions and abilities
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BLACKR3AP3R0721

Thanks for voting my story!! I hope it entertained you. Also, what is your opinions of the story itself?

Nothisisnotokbutok

@BLACKR3AP3R8088 I might as well give a proper review since I got to the current chapter to give my thoughts on the Destiny and Date a live (Yamato 2022) crossover.
            Story: 
            I'd say it is better than most fanfictions I have read, but I don't think their is much that needs to be done with Logan and specter. I think that if anything you need to establish a bit more emotion in the characters (specifically the date-a-live characters) I feel like their is a disconnect of what the characters would act like if something completely new enters the field so to speak. I would just think that adding some more enlightenment into the thoughts of the date-a-live cast would flesh out the characters a bit more.
            Grammar and flow:
            The flow is decent. not too fast pace, but not too slow either. Grammar is Okay, I just think going back and editing the book or getting an editor to edit the book would help. I don't know if English is your primary language or not, but either way English is a language that is prone to error if you don't spell check or edit it.
            In general opinion:
            I think the way this story is executed is pretty spot on which earns a decent amount of points. I think Logan needs to be more of a badass since guardians in destiny are all about HYPE, badassery, acts of situation comedy, Raging over BS happening, sense of wonderment, and most importantly F U N!!!  If you don't have this then it want feel like a guardian crossover. I think this story is......Satisfactory on this especially towards the end.
            Overall summary:
            "...a causal loop within the weapon's mechanism, suggesting that the firing process somehow binds space and time into…"
            My Rating: https://youtu.be/RX_WNZi48rM - Yes I give this story a chad Sinbad theme out of ALL REAL NUMBERS.
            
            Good day to you, also Sinbad from magi is pretty badass and their will be a new season of magi expected sometime soon apparently. 
            BYE!!
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BLACKR3AP3R0721

@Nothisisnotokbutok  But, to answer your question, yes. There will be a Guardian who will or could use the Exotic pulse rifle in the story.
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BLACKR3AP3R0721

@Nothisisnotokbutok Ah, yes. The Outbreak Prime (Perfected). Well, in the story, Logan's battleship contains an armory. Weapons from D1 and D2 would be stored in there and Logan can retrieve whatever weapon he wishes to desire within the armory deck. 
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