NoviceWriterMaviolet

He suddenly appeared in my life and I cared so much about him, like always to much today is the last day I might be seeing him and my heart breaks thinking of this thought. His no our longing stares will always be etched in my memory and heart forever he will be. I know deep down I'm not good enough for him, and my life is to stressful to bring him into it. That and we will soon be apart and he shouldn't have to wait for me, he shouldn't have to care about me when I'll be gone. We are from two different worlds no matter how much we have in common and how much i love running my hands through his hair smiling lovestruck. I miss him already and I haven't even left yet. But he will be going on a trip and by the time he comes back I might be gone. I'll be nothing but a memory, we might always think about what could have been and what we were to scared to start. I like him and he might like me back but life doesn't care about that, my life is too screwed up for him to be with me. Yet I long to hold his hand, stay on the phone all night with him, how I long to tell him about it. This time it's serious, this time I can't help but look into his eyes while he looks back into mine. I am too far into his mixed signals and cheeky smiles and he's different from the rest. 

Magiccorndog89

Thanks for the votes :3

Magiccorndog89

thanks and yeah, all the characters were supposed to die, but I changed my mind.
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NoviceWriterMaviolet

@cheyanna1018 aweee np I really liked you book but the ending was heart breaking.
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NoviceWriterMaviolet

He suddenly appeared in my life and I cared so much about him, like always to much today is the last day I might be seeing him and my heart breaks thinking of this thought. His no our longing stares will always be etched in my memory and heart forever he will be. I know deep down I'm not good enough for him, and my life is to stressful to bring him into it. That and we will soon be apart and he shouldn't have to wait for me, he shouldn't have to care about me when I'll be gone. We are from two different worlds no matter how much we have in common and how much i love running my hands through his hair smiling lovestruck. I miss him already and I haven't even left yet. But he will be going on a trip and by the time he comes back I might be gone. I'll be nothing but a memory, we might always think about what could have been and what we were to scared to start. I like him and he might like me back but life doesn't care about that, my life is too screwed up for him to be with me. Yet I long to hold his hand, stay on the phone all night with him, how I long to tell him about it. This time it's serious, this time I can't help but look into his eyes while he looks back into mine. I am too far into his mixed signals and cheeky smiles and he's different from the rest. 

NoviceWriterMaviolet

She was lost in the thought of him and she stated at him from afar.She cares for him, to much maybe. But she couldn't get the words out and tell him. He was moving further away from her and she could see it but she wanted to hold him and that was all. But this world is unkind to those who continuously ask and never give. She wasn't much of a giver and she knew it. Yet his name was stuck on the top of her tongue. So did she say anything ?

jadeelizabeth12

hey babes, it would mean so much to me if you could check out my book of poems ‘from me to you’ on my profile. there are only 8 parts so far but I will be writing more in the future. constructive criticism is appreciated as this is the first time I’ve written my own poems and I would love to know how I could make them better xx

XxDark_Wolf_LoverxX

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XxDark_Wolf_LoverxX

@Marie7220_ that's awesome I'll have to check your stuff out 
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NoviceWriterMaviolet

@XxDark_Wolf_LoverxX yeah I understand I did the same thing to,  but it was on another account and I took it down as now I'm writing more again since I lost the other one.   
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