ZacharyDow
Hi! Thanks for adding Prehistoric Wild to your reading list. Hope ya don’t mind me asking, but how did ya come across it?
Novorno
@ZacharyDow This is a fantastic work, and I have one suggestion. When describing a creature such as the Temnodontosaur, you should use some flamboyant language, i.e; be a bit more descriptive. Instead of stating the colour, add a depth, 'it's smooth, rippling, jet black hide'. This is great, will definitely read more of your work.