irismay83

Hey, I'm sorry for posting here. But I noticed that you enjoy reading stories with mafia romance tropes. I started working on a story like that and I was wondering, if you had time and if you'd be prepared to check it out. 
          
          The title is The Other Side: The Assessment. It's the first story from a series. If you like it, please feel free to comment and vote on it, because I would really like to get some feedback, so I can improve my writing skills. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/378325166-the-other-side-the-assessment

GarethN

Hiya, Now_or!
          
          I don’t normally do this, but I see you have a particular interest in mafia books. So please could I draw your attention to my own work, ‘A Kitten called Cat’. This is a mafia book though, because our heroine is such an innocent creature, it takes her a long time to understand what’s going on!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/205443198-a-kitten-called-cat
          
          I hope you’ll give it a try.
          
          Thanks,
          
          – GN –

AnaPostolache6

Hi, would you please help me find a book? It's about gangs in london I believe. I remember pieces of it. How she has to work for him, and one day she sees him kissing another girl so she runs away but he founds her and "kills" her friend (he doent actually). She then wakes up tied up to a chair in the basement. His second in command slaps her, and when the boss gets in, he punches her. I also remember her being kidnapped by another gang, and she miscarries because of the abuse, and so he blames her for it. She also takes drugs, tries to suicide in the bathroom by holding herself under the water.
          

butterflyXmm

butterflyXmm

Thank you so much for your feedback, I kind of rushed the first chapters but I'm working on editing them. I hope you stick around and read the whole story! 
            
            I'm glad you like it <3
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Now_0r_Never

@butterflyXmm Its a nice start to a novel! I would recommend touching up on your grammar but I like the plot so far!
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KayaNaidu

Hello to you, Author. Please check out the book 'my Designs' on my profile. Here's the link :
          
          https://embed.wattpad.com/story/289963983
          
          Please vote, comment, share and follow.

KayaNaidu

@Now_0r_Never Thank You So Much! :D
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Now_0r_Never

@KayaNaidu I will check it out!
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SabhyataSahu

My apologies for sliding into your Conversations board uninvited.
          I just wanted to grab your attention to my stories. There is an arranged marriage story, a teen romance, a young adult, and some mafia stories. They are all COMPLETED.
          Once again, I'm sorry for intruding.
           Have a nice day ahead.!!!!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/239672415-mafia-miss-honey

Now_0r_Never

Alright! Let me check it out.
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