Dear those who have read "Seven." I am currently contemplating on a large decision. My decision to completely rewrite the Story.
I have found that the story I have now, is one that is filled with plot holes and I feel as though it is poorly written. The original story I have began to publish was begun when I first started to create the language asmodian (in the story the made up language is "incorrect" as I have revised and finalized the language over the years.) I also have horrible Grammer and spelling in some moments. I have also found that I have more direction as to what's happening in the story. I want to re write it so it's not as confusing or contradictory in some aspects. (For example, saying a demon can't be hurt while out of a human body, then having the demon scream in pain although it's put of a human body. I also have a better sense of the characters and what I want them to be like, and I would also like for the characters to have a more equal representation in the story. For now, the original story will say posted, but there will be no further updates to the original story, as I will be working on the re written, finalized version of the story. I still do not know if I will get rid of the original, unfinished story, once the finalized story is complete. Thank you, and any comments questions or concerns, please ask. Iufooa- Natalie ♡
