Hey there bud, I noticed that you absolutely tore through my story today, and wanted to ask what you thought about it? What parts do you particularly enjoy? And what are some thing you think could be slightly better? Thank you for reading though, it's very appreciated!
Honestly I thought it was really good. I enjoyed the parts that involved the wolf and lamb as I’ve never seen that concept before. Your writing was also very clean and had great detail. And I also wanted to point out your sad moments like the miniature stadium scene worked really well and hit home. Thanks for taking the time to make this book I can’t wait for the next chapter
I liked the stories that you put in your reading lists! I just read about 5 of them and enjoyed them. Also thank you for you know voting for my story Really really appreciate it!