Nyoki1

@Justastorylover I liked your story, and even though i still have more chapters to go, i'm intrigued by your character Jason

BlackCherryGlass

Thank you for looking at my stories.  If you would like to tell me what your favorite parts are, that would be nice.  I like it that you dream a lot.  That is important to a writer!!!
          
          Peace,
          BCG

Nyoki1

In your first story I liked how the stranger that called himself Jesus had Paul thinking and changed his perspective on things. The second story again challenged the doubts that people have that Jesus exists (I guess because I have friends that don't believe and I never seem to be able to convince them with my own personal experience with Jesus,mark you :) i'm not saying I saw Him). The second story though the rule that Jesus wrote on the board was no.2 , I had been meaning to ask you what's no.1.  Also, I wanted to ask you what was the question that the main character had for Jesus and was told yes?The accident made me cry because I could relate to experiences in it. But even if I couldn't relate I would still cry because all your stories seemed to draw me in emotionally. I read your story yesterday and I'm still thinking about it which speaks to the quality of your work.
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