@Princess-sa-ra
First of all, thank you very much for writing feedback. I really appreciate it.
2. At first Kaya did find herself burdened because so many lives were at stake and only she knew how and when to save them. But later in the story after she met Itachi, she realised she was making the same mistake as him. Doing everything alone and not asking for help but it changed after that.
3. I know that the intimate scenes were only a few, and it was because I was writing for the first time and also because the story demanded that. But yeah I agree, later on I could've added a scene or two . I'll keep that in mind for the future.
My next project is not on reincarnation, but I'll try.
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