Nyxrae___
Hey guys!
For those who are reading my story, "The Twin flame: Uzumaki Mirayah", please check out the chapter, "PULSE" again, cause I have rewritten sasuke's pov. I guess...i have made it a bit spicier...?
Nyxrae___
Takashiu
Now that I really think about it and how she said she's going to do something to the village and that pretty much her targets are Root and Danzo her targets are pretty much very easily to know it's the elders of the village and she's going to expose the truth of their darkest secrets to the public that means the Uchiha massacre And it's pretty much going to ruin Itachi's plans of dying and Sasuke being upset with the village and pretty much her image as a Shinobi will be looked out very differently because all the information about Naruto and her are in those files and I think most they're suffering was thanks to danzo if that is public the world of the village hidden in the leaves is going to be in danger not by the Shinobi of the village but by the public people are going to look at the village with disgust and mistrust that means Shinobi of the village are going to lose jobs a lot that means they are children kidnappings and the same attitude of the other things are going to be noticed pretty much what I'm thinking about her She is not going to be merciful to the village in the leaves Best way to get revenge is keeping them alive to feel their suffering of their mistakes The same void she had to survive in and I hope she gets out of that void to find something new not in the village out of it people that should get actually feel like she can connect to so I really hope she gets a good life outside of the village and learn to trust people outside of it
Takashiu
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Okay and now I'm worried for the Ambu Black ops member who has to fight her because I don't think she's going to be merciful and I think she might accidentally kill him or put him in a coma because I think the test pretty much be fight to prove yourself and I bet the Hokage is going to be scared because let's be honest She should have investigated what the fuck happened to her or where she was because everyone thought her were dead because so much blood was on the floor they shouldn't investigated and I think she was k i a personally I think someone took her in and trained her and and properly healed her and then let the fox do its work because at this point I'm putting too many theories out there that right now she was trained by one of the tailed the beasts And there might be three of them that went rogue pretty much for good reasons one from the Stone Village one from the cloud village and one from the Mist both those are the members who might have went rogue for good reasons for how they were treated And she pretty much has the training of both the tailed beast and the one who trained her to be pretty much on Black ops level of dangerous
Takashiu
Why do you make me so easily hating the village because it feels like she's not going to go after revenge on them or anything like that she's just going to protect Naruto from them and that's her first priority to protect Naruto that means literally throw herself in the middle of a chidori to protect Naruto she's pretty much going to be self-sacrifice at this point because she has no will to live personally you did a good job making this character
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@Nyxrae___ I got to say something I need to say it right now what the fuck where is the toad sage where is supposed to be an adopted member of their family at when she revealed the fourth Hokage was her father or finding out her mother Right now this girl is pretty much walking towards Danzo world and the the fifth didn't try to grab my favorite frog from his porn stash
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@Nyxrae___ personally I just can't wait for her to say that out loud in front of the Hokage and Jiraiya because let's all be honest who would give a shit about this village if the only person you care about lives there and he wants to be Hokage The only reason she's sticking around is cuz it's Naruto's not dead but if anyone harms him that's in the village well they're going to be a dead body That's what I would do because my feelings for the Shinobi of the village hidden in the leaves are mixed their good ones bad ones but let's all be honest 90% of the village hated Naruto for no reason because he has a nine-tailed fox in him And because of Danzo exposing that so the village can vent their anger onto that poor kid
Princess-sa-ra
are u posting a new story?
i really love your story and hope for a next one.
Nyxrae___
@Princess-sa-ra First of all, thank you very much for writing feedback. I really appreciate it. 2. At first Kaya did find herself burdened because so many lives were at stake and only she knew how and when to save them. But later in the story after she met Itachi, she realised she was making the same mistake as him. Doing everything alone and not asking for help but it changed after that. 3. I know that the intimate scenes were only a few, and it was because I was writing for the first time and also because the story demanded that. But yeah I agree, later on I could've added a scene or two . I'll keep that in mind for the future. My next project is not on reincarnation, but I'll try. Love Author
Princess-sa-ra
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I like reading stories with the theme of reincarnation.
It's a shame that Kaya not only saw this as a new opportunity but it also became a big burden for her psychologically.
She should fully embrace her new life.
I really liked the love story between her and Itachi and that you wrote and showed the intimacy. It could have been more. ;-)
If possible, you could write OC stories like this where the characters know what's going to happen but take their lives into their own hands and aren't afraid of it.
Thank u for your hard work!
Nyxrae___
@Princess-sa-ra, Also wanted to know what you really liked about this story. How was kaya's character. I really want someone's feedback.
Nyxrae___
Hey guys! I am really sorry to tell you that I won't be posting my story, Restoration: A Naruto Fanfiction until a month. I am really busy and my exams are next month. So until then...take care. I'll be right back as soon as my exams are over.
Thank you
Nyxrae___
I have updated the last chapter *Breaking of the ice*
I just found the photo hot and it fit the chapter, so....... Enjoy
Nyxrae___
Hey guys! I am writing this post to ask if you all are liking the story or not? How is Kaya's character so far. Please tell as I need feedbacks.
I am happy though, so many reads. I didn't expected that. But I would be more grateful if you could tell, if there is a need for improvement.
Thank you