Author_JyoTae

Please support my book "CROSSED PATHS"
          
          He was the Mafia everyone feared
          Cold. Heartless. HE CRIED HE CRIED ALOT BUT ONLY FOR HIS "ERA". Broken by an unfinished love that left scars deeper than bullets.
          His life was chaos… until ''YN'' walked in.
          
          A girl who didn’t just enter his world, 
          She completed every missing piece of it.
          Where others saw a monster, she saw a man worth saving.
          And where she brought light… darkness refused to let go.
          
          .........A love that was never meant to be.
          .........A bond too powerful to deny.
          
          Will she heal him
          Or will his world destroy her first?
           #MafiaLove  #BrokenButBeautiful
          
          If you won't like it than feel free to suggest me some improvement. 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/376934650-crossed-paths-kth

Author_JyoTae

Hello, how are you? I wanted to ask you about my new book,, is it good or not. I  want some feedbacks because all reader's feedback means a lot to me.❤❤.

ODDLYbhatnagar

Hey @Author_JyoTae! I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed it—it was fantastic! Sorry for the late reply, but I truly believe that creativity shines through in what we do.
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Jaygrfx7

Hey there, if you've time, please read my book called mafia's obsession.. 
          
          The first few chapters might be cringe but I've improved...!
          
          Sorry for posting without permission, feel free to remove this message if this disturbed you in any way 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/333742327?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=jiyoungmochi

ODDLYbhatnagar

@Jaygrfx7 I have read it it's really great
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