Haitianink_

Hi everyone!
          
          I'm a longtime reader and a first-time writer. After years of reading, I finally decided to publish a story of my own, and I would love some feedback from fellow writers and readers. 
          
          The story is called Accidental Soulmates, a contemporary romance featuring Haitian characters, family dynamics, and a marriage of convenience that neither main character expected.
          
          I've currently posted the first five chapters. I'm still learning and growing as a writer, so I'd especially appreciate constructive feedback on the writing, pacing, characters, and overall story.
          
          Thank you to anyone who takes the time to check it out. I truly appreciate it! ❤️
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/412002378-accidental-soulmates

DariusNadael

Hello, I'm also an author and I think you seem to have a good style, but a word of advice: publishing so many chapters is risky. It breaks a suspense of a series we're waiting to see ( each chapter should be self-contained), and especially if you can't keep up the pace , the algorithm will suggest fewer chapters to you.

anotheramaya

Hey love! I'm currently working on my very first ongoing story on Wattpad, and I'd really appreciate it if you could check it out and share your thoughts. Your feedback would mean a lot to me!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/user/anotheramaya

anotheramaya

Awwe you are sweet! Thankieesss ;3
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OMALOVESRED

@anotheramaya It's amazing!! Girl!!! I love it. Keep updating please 
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