OMG_ItsJerBear
Okay you guys. I made some changes to "Next To You" and renamed it "Change". Can someone let me know if the changes were applied cause wattpad is acting real stupid and is not letting me see the changes I made.
OMG_ItsJerBear
OMG_ItsJerBear
okay I dont know whats goin on with my phone but as soon as I get it together I'll publish these updates.
OMG_ItsJerBear
Ya girl done ended up gettin off early so that means: UPDATE!!!!
DesareeLangley
It's ok
DesareeLangley
Thank you so much for the feedback☺
DesareeLangley
I have another account name rayray722 and I have a book on the that account but I forgot my password and the book is called Hello or Goodbye then the next chapter is on this account, so would you read it and tell me what you think so far.☺
OMG_ItsJerBear
@DesareeLangley I think your story will be great if you slow it down and give more detail about whats going on in each scene. You went from birth, to 6 yrs old then 9 yrs old. Its like your speeding up the story. And you have a lot of run-ons. Other than that, I think you're going in the right dorection.
DesareeLangley
Thank you!
DesareeLangley
Can you follow me pleaseeee
DesareeLangley
Yes please update because I really like the book.
OMG_ItsJerBear
Yall Im so sorry. My laptop is still broken and my new job is VERY time consuming and leaves me very tired on my off days. It's like I hybernate or something lol. But I will try to update as soon as I possibly can. I aint forgot about my love!