Riri

Hi Riri! I see you have a sound opinions about other writer's story.  I am a new writer and  I would like to ask a favor from you. I need your opinion  about my book...  pleeease read it :) :).
             I think you can give me a sound advice I would really appreciate any opinion coming from you, whether its good or bad it will definitely help me a lot! Thank you!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/152723271-a%C3%B1o-luz-aparte-light-years-apart