Meeeeouch

Just a little help for ya. Make your chapters longer. If you make people wait to long for a short chapter they're going to lose interest fast. Ask people for comments and ideas for each chapter. That way it gets your readers involved and gives you ideas for what's to come. So in reality your 5 chapters is like 2. Shoot around Wattpad to see how people have chapters laid out.  You might see an idea in that story you could use to span off of into one of your chapters.  Didn't want to come across rude but I do give ideas to many writers with their stories and they let me know if it helps them. Take care. Ju Ju ❤

Meeeeouch

@Meeeeouch you are welcome!! There was more but Wattpad wouldn't let me post it. I was over the limit of characters for a message. That is why I split it. Sorry!    So it wasn't to much?  I like to go on and on because things keep popping up in my head. I do that with my my friends with a text. Haaa!  Bisoùs Bisoùs 
            Julia❤
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OOF_oofer

@Meeeeouch Thank you for the advice 
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