OahuIsland28

I am here to apologize and im sorry for not respecting your opinion and giving my opinion when its not needed I suppose. Sorry if you felt I was attacking you which was not intended.

Are you from Oahu

Well, don't start with tough life billionaire raising sister wanted a good life had everything. No one wants a sob story and I guess its gonna end in a happy ending. No, you're basic this is a basic story every wattpad user has wrote this type of story. Write something that's dreamy but not too extravagated and don't use the terms: bridal style, billionaire, mafia, italian mafia, Starbucks and other basic terms. Read stories then find out what to write. Just some advice for new wattpad writers because some readers (me) doesn't want to hear similar stories like this. Another thing some black girls are not poor and some black girls have good lives so not just you but every wattpad user that reads this, most black girls have good lives and if you're black and writing about poorness or mother hate or drug abuse or anything that sounds bad, most people of brown color don't live like rats.