@OakleyJ
So umm dude are you dead and if not are you ever going to update phantom
I'm just here checking the story a final time before I delete my account. It's a shame I never saw the end of it. Its rather depressing I hope someday I get to read the finished version.
Heyyy, Do you need a cover? Cuz I can make one.
Hello! Sorry to be a stalker but I saw that you left incredibly helpful suggestions on a fellow Wattpadian’s “Plastic or Planet” entry, and I was wondering, if you get a chance, if you could maybe do the same for mine? You left such fantastic feedback, and I would appreciate the assistance tremendously :)
Absolutely, I’d love to! It’s on my page, so it should appear if you click on my icon but nevertheless here’s the link :): https://my.w.tt/Fky6NCdfAR and any kind of feedback is perfect.
@AccidentallyArtsy for sure. I just need a link to it. Are you looking for any specific feedback? It would be lovely if you could also check out my entry: Ocean of Change. I haven't entered it yet though. :)
Thank u for voting on Grave x I hope u enjoyed it if u read it!
I’ve started reading but I have to go to the gym so i’ll keep going after
Hi!! I love your profile pic omg so cute.. anyway was wondering if you'd like to help me out by providing some feedback on the early draft of my novel Grave? In return I'd love to check out any of your work!! let me know what you think! :)
Hi! Thanks for helping out on my story's last paragraph on the forum. Very helpful. I also added your current book in my reading list because it sounds awesome.
Mia
@misspopgoingnowhere I'm glad to help. 'Showing' is something that I struggle with and am in the process of learning. Thank you! The piece is still a WIP, so don't expect anything too polished. Feel free to critique as you read. Cheers.
Hi! Thank you so much for reading and commenting and voting on my story it's...I'm really really thankful!!
I read that you like paranormal and horror and well, my story won't go into horror themes that's for sure (this is my first story and I don't want my characters to suffer too much), but there definitely will be fantasy and adventure :) I hope you liked it enough to go on with the next chapters (if not, well, I'll just have to improve myself!).
Again, thanks a lot!
@ OakleyJ Oh I'm on a trip right now but I might just do the same when I get back, it's a nice idea!
Well, thanks a lot for sharing then.
Yeah? Well mine sure isn't going that way :)
Well if you have the time and if you wish to, I'll gladly take constructive criticism, it's helped me before, and I'm sure it could help me again (my chapters have titles now because a nice person suggested I put them, they were right!)
Ahah, I'm in this phase yes, but the thing is actually planned in my head? I just have to write it now and add bits and pieces :)
@Sunnightmist No problem. Thanks for sharing your work. I'm just reading through the first bits of the other entries for the fantasy section of the Earnesty Contest. The contrast jumped out at me, so I thought I'd share that I enjoyed it. NOt all good stories need horror elements or a ton of character suffering, so feel no pressure to add these to your work. I may read more depending on time. If I do, would you enjoy some constructive criticism? I get that you may still be in the 'just get the thing written' and may not want feedback yet. So no pressure. Anyways, thanks again for sharing your work. And good luck with the contest.
Thank you for voting on Monogamy for Morons and adding it to your reading list! I look forward to reading some of your work soon! :)
@TJ_Stories "Monogamy for Morons" is hilarious. I'm curious to see where you're going with it. Thanks for sharing. Cool. It's always fun to know fellow writers want to check out your work. Always feel free to critique. :)
Thank you very much for reading and voting on 'Universal Shipping!' I hope you enjoyed it!!
I like your rationale for picking a scallop as your animal. It got me thinking about my own, and I gotta be honest, I think I'd be a sloth. Slow moving, tires easily, and occasionally falls out of trees after mistaking my own arms for tree branches? Check, check, and check! :p
Thanks again! <3 Foss