Dimitri_Thorwell

You know what... From you? Yes. You actually have an account,  you have works and lovely lively conversations. so yes. I'd love for YOUR feedback 

ObadaNoman

@Dimitri_Thorwell Aww, no worries at all Wattpad loves being chaotic sometimes  And yes I'd love to hear your thoughts your feedback means a lot
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Dimitri_Thorwell

Also, sorry for posting on your conversation wall. Wattpad literally keeps giving me errors while trying to reply to your post. ~<3
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Soulwanderer58

Is it okay if we do it here? I'm not interested in chatting on discord. I have my reasons. So I'd rather talk about it here. And about story ideas? Well, thanks for the offer but I'll kindly decline the offer.
          
          I'm not trying to create a crazy story driven stuff for children of playcare. All it is are just a series of short stories, oneshots, and its an anthology.  Plus, I don't take requests so I hope you understand. 
          
          But feedback is all I want so I'll know what to do to improve in the future. Like the pacing being too quick or transitions needed to be smooth. 
          
          With that all said, I hope you understand what I'm saying here. I got too much on my hands when it comes to trying to write and I don't want to burn myself out.

ObadaNoman

@Soulwanderer58 Absolutely, I’m really looking forward to whatever you share next those Nightmare Critter one-shots already sound like something unique and exciting  I totally get where you’re coming from about pacing and transitions, and I’ll always be happy to give feedback whenever you want it. And just to mention if you ever feel like having a visual to go along with your stories, I also do illustrations. No pressure at all just thought I’d offer in case it ever fits your vibe. Take care and keep creating at your own pace!
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Soulwanderer58

@ObadaNoman Thanks so much, I'm glad you understand. Even with whatever hiccups I make, I'm glad you enjoyed this series of short stories for Children of Playcare. But Feedback is important so I can improve and remember this for future references.
            
            Until when I released another Nightmare Critter one shot. I hope you have a wonderful day.
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ObadaNoman

@Soulwanderer58 Totally understand, and thanks for being upfront about everything! I really respect the way you’re handling your work focusing on what you want to create without overwhelming yourself. Anthology-style stories are super fun to read anyway, especially when they give little glimpses into a world or theme. I’d still love to keep reading and offering feedback if you’re open to it! You’re doing great so far, and sometimes just a small tweak like pacing or smoother transitions can really elevate the vibe. No pressure from my side at all just here to support however I can. 
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Magnificent_18

Where can I see some examples of your work?

ObadaNoman

@Magnificent_18  here is my discord kindly send me request obada_noman
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ObadaNoman

@Magnificent_18 I'd love to show you some of my work! We can chat more easily on Discord if that works for you. I also have a Facebook page where I post my graphic designs. Let me know which platform is more convenient for you, and I’ll share my social links or user! 
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hanniball09

Hello men, sorry man but don't have discord, it's not my thing, but anyway If you want to see how the characters look like, wait for it, I rather not spoil the surprise.

ObadaNoman

@hanniball09 we can chat od dis or insta or fb whatver works for you just for fun though lol
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ObadaNoman

@hanniball09 You're totally right   I’ll wait patiently  But whenever you’re free, just let me know! I’d love to chat more about your story and the ideas you have. You’re honestly super talented, and I’ve even come up with a few ideas myself if you’re interested in hearing them 
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