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Mid terms already… college is something else… anyway small update I’m currently plugging away at the next part, eta till I get it done and ready to post should be within the next month and a half or so I apologize on the wait as it’s not what I originally had planned but this next chapter is another big one
Hey Obsidian! Came here to ask a Lore question about the Retribution series. How many nations/continents did the Anthros take over during the story?
Without trying to spoil much, (also I plan to have explanations come up soon)
it’s a bit of a blur as they start out kind of everywhere but the countries who have the dense forest areas and or low human activity in rural regions in Europe, Asia, some areas in Africa, South America are/were heavily occupied.
Again I have explanations coming soon through a scene I’m actively trying to incorporate to give you all a better understanding of what has happened and or what is happening in this rendition of the story and can’t wait to actually have some world building that isn’t just guns blazing through a third person perspective
Took way to long, my bad guys but hey 1 hour before midnight here
Editing right now should have it uploaded sometime this Tuesday sorry chaps
Good day everybody, so school is back up and running but it shouldn’t hinder me as much as it has in the past.
I did plan on updating on New Year’s Day to give you all a good start off to the year but that plan FUBAR’d the moment I decided I wanted this next chapter to be 10+ pages on google docs lol
I’ll do my best to keep yall updated and prevent myself from leaving you all in the dark.
Till I see you again folks, drink some water and enjoy yourselves a happy 2025
Happy Christmas you lot, hope yall had an amazing holiday
Amazing story remaster so far
Well where to start…
Almost one whole year since I’ve updated HR and the grand total reads as of today has just now crossed 13k… to be honest I’m still pretty shocked about how many people were invested into the story I had to tell at the time which now averaged about a good constant 300 which I’m very happy about.
But that’s not the reason for this post, one year ago I felt the problem with the old project was the idea everything felt rushed and character actions felt pushed without reason and without logic. Nothing carried any real weight and it felt like anyone could take what I had and do better.
And I stand by my decision to cut the project short and reset the scene to give you a better experience of what I initially imagined which brings me to what I have scheduled tomorrow.
At exactly 6:00 PM MST a new story will become available ready to take center stage and hopefully it will present a more polished story of which I believe you deserve.
Hey since you're making new characters and the old story is discontinued I've been meaning to ask: were you going to reveal Maverick (the dragon if I remember correctly) being sick, scarred or something along those lines?
You left that thought in the air when they escape from the clothing store and he is left bruised from being dragged too hard by the wrist, which was weird for what is the most similar thing to a natural scaly tank in the anthro universe.
@Obsidian-Ace That's cool, dragon guy taking the heavy role too serious and paying the price lol. I'm guessing it would have showed more and more as the story progressed but oh well RIP this team/story. (Though it would have been kinda funny if he got in a fight with one of the humans and ended on the ground just after receiving a couple of punches.)
Glad someone caught that.
To explain the situation with Maverick you’d have to catch a few other small details exactly like the store situation.
The other most prominent example I left was after they escaped from custody and out of the small group the only one injured slightly was Maverick with the bullet graze.
While the other example would be his internal bleeding after being shot while he was part of a different unit.
The reasoning for his easy bruising and weak body is how much he had to physically “tank” during his time as a soldier in his prior role.
The idea I wanted to create for him was how his body was giving out on him from how much he destroyed his body trying to protect his prior team without seeking medical treatment after they died.
Similar to some situations when certain organs in the human body suffer damage they do not or cannot repair themselves.
I’m not the best at explaining it but the idea I wanted to share was his own body’s durability and healing were heavily inhibited by the amount of physical trauma it already experienced.
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