Obsidian0

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Oh, 
          	
          	It has been a while hmm? 
          	
          	Not gonna lie, I almost forgot I had a story going on, the last few weeks I didn't work on it, I'm struggling with personal stuff and got back into playing, no modding more than playing Skyrim XD. I'm writing more in my own head than anywhere else if that make any sense. 
          	
          	Wanted to put a turbo since I had thought about it, rather than having everything for late March I wanted to challenge myself for a release around December, like a 'Christmas gift' from me if you would call it that... but yeah, while try to keep you updated. 
          	You can thanks  Redhodd20, received notifications of his messages, I think it would have gone to oblivion without him since I'm not much around nowadays. 
          	
          	As for the chapter, I'm still trying to see if I go for 3 long ones or I cut the three in... three, making it nine chapters for the end. 
          	
          	Hint of 'the day' is: "I was your age when I conquered them, now it's your turn [...]" a conversation between Aerys and his children. 
          	
          	So yeah, take care.
          	
          	(Nah, I can't fucking wait to get back into writing 'actively' I have a whole thing planned between Aerys & Alicent. 
          	Aerys will enter a more serious and 'darker' path ahead of him, I wouldn't call it darker but if you know you know. 
          	Alicent will become precious to him. <3
          	
          	And done, I will not give you anything else, hope everyone will enjoy or find something positive about the whole story at the end.) 

Obsidian0

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Oh, 
          
          It has been a while hmm? 
          
          Not gonna lie, I almost forgot I had a story going on, the last few weeks I didn't work on it, I'm struggling with personal stuff and got back into playing, no modding more than playing Skyrim XD. I'm writing more in my own head than anywhere else if that make any sense. 
          
          Wanted to put a turbo since I had thought about it, rather than having everything for late March I wanted to challenge myself for a release around December, like a 'Christmas gift' from me if you would call it that... but yeah, while try to keep you updated. 
          You can thanks  Redhodd20, received notifications of his messages, I think it would have gone to oblivion without him since I'm not much around nowadays. 
          
          As for the chapter, I'm still trying to see if I go for 3 long ones or I cut the three in... three, making it nine chapters for the end. 
          
          Hint of 'the day' is: "I was your age when I conquered them, now it's your turn [...]" a conversation between Aerys and his children. 
          
          So yeah, take care.
          
          (Nah, I can't fucking wait to get back into writing 'actively' I have a whole thing planned between Aerys & Alicent. 
          Aerys will enter a more serious and 'darker' path ahead of him, I wouldn't call it darker but if you know you know. 
          Alicent will become precious to him. <3
          
          And done, I will not give you anything else, hope everyone will enjoy or find something positive about the whole story at the end.) 

Obsidian0

Yoooooo, 
          
          Some updates and honesty. 
          
          So, this season while not writing about the Dance put a punch to my already crished motivation to write. 
          
          I mean come on, Alicent-Rhaenyra is hugely forced, Rhaenyra's motherhood where has it gone? This season should have been to avenge Luc and we had nothing... Yet she took Jae's head, so how does "a son for a son" still apply!? And in what world Alicent would sold her own children off??? Imagine if in Game Of Thrones the feud between Stark-Lannister had been solved by Cersei offering Jeoffrey's head?? The fact that Lahor has been genderbent, what for? The whole Daemon's arc while being useless could have been better if they exploited Laena more, made Harwin come back to confront him by the fact he failed to protect Rhaenyra and Lucerys, or even made something with Luc. So many possibilities, plus they already butchered everything so why not actually try to do something thta can be good and logical!? And i stand on my hill, his Harrenhall arc is useless, the concluaion is literally what we know since s1. 
          
          For the honesty part, this week i could have worked a lot on the story but didn't do anything, didn't use my notes nor anything really. So, like i said I'll try to keep my word to have everything ready before march 2025. Will see what happens and how everything plays out on my end. 
          
          Take care all. Amd thanks to the people which are sticking up with me. (:
          Hopefully your patience will be rewarded for something that'll be worth it. 

Zacharycox1210Cox

I have questions for you When is the next chapter dragon wrath going  come out And is aerys 1 targaryen going to have blackfire 

Obsidian0

@ Zacharycox1210Cox  Hi, 
            
            Like i said, i gave myself a deadline till march 2025, and it will not be a single chapter but a mass release to finish the story. It while take time, i need to form a text with my notes, and lazyness/procrastination is getting the best out of me xD.
             Depends on the last episode of the season since i took a few things out of the show to put them in the book, for the moment it's not looking good since the season is a disappointment for me, gonna watch it through the week and give my final thoughts about the season then rewatch it to start writing the rest of the story. 
            
            As for Blackfyre i still dont know, Aerys already have a valyrian sword of his own and the blade of his prosthesis, she will probably go to one of his son or... a daughter, or even given to Daemon, who knows.
            
            As for your question on LOTR, yeah watched it years ago, and no i don't plan any story for it. 
            
            Thanks for your interest and take care. 
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Obsidian0

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Hi, 
          
          Just wanna share my thoughts about s2... and my interest for the moment has died out, I mean:
          
          - Lucerys was a turning point for everything, no one mention him;
          
          - Rhaenyra literally doing nothing, never speak back, hell even her children shit on her, only times when she dared to talk were with Daemon Corlys and Rhaenys, but with 2 out of 3 out.... complaining about the fact to not be a boy and blablabla when Viserys would never have held her back to do what she wanted, and ironically her not being a boy and him having Aemond and Aegon while he neglected them...;
          
          - Daeron's introduction is garbage, Alicent seem to literally have learned his existence on the spot, should have been introduced in s1 with a pregnant belly or when Otto came back from Old Town talking about him...;
          
          - Daemond in his haunted mansion is meh while taking a good hunch of it, I've seen people complain about him fucking Alyssa, IT IS POSSIBLE since in s1 him and Viserys talk about their parents (so, her and Baelon) so no, in the show she don't seem to have died when he was 3 and little Aegon doesn't seem canon either;
          
          - dragons and costumes are looking awful as fuck, in s1 we had Alicent wearing superb attire, same could be said for Rhaenys... now everyone except Simon just wear shit. 
          For dragons, in s1 I found the scene of Rhaenyra-Syrax flying above King's Landing looking like shit, somehow they made it worst for Aegon-Sunfyre, Meleys looked like a big ass pineapple, Vhagar like a Komodo... last but not least Rook's Rest looked like shit, the saddles were taking almost half of the screen, HELLO WHAT CAN I SEE!? 
          
          

Obsidian0

@ Obsidian0  - too much focus on dragonseed, they should have been introduced at Jacaerys calling, not before... 
            
            - and so on... 
            
            From a TV spectator standpoint, yeah, this season is mid, at least to me. Although it still give me ideas to implement in my story.
            
            Oh and what would you like Aerys-Aegon's relationship to be? I don't know, my boy Aegon (even Aemond) need a father figure, but at the same time I want Aerys to found a sort of friendship he never had, the brotherhood he wished. For Daeron, I think I'll write him as a mix of father figure and brother. 
            Really liked Daemon's scene... who knows... maybe Aerys will be visited by Aemma... "My favorite child" or something..... 
            
            
            Tell me what you think and stay safe. 
            
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Obsidian0

Oi oi lovelies, 
          
          Watched the 1st episode of s2, it gave me ideas to incorporate.
          
          For example we see briefly Halaena's drawings about her dreams, I think it'll be interesting for her to talk about them with Aerys and why not even learning the news of him being her father this way. 
          There's Viserys's statue, it'll probably be replaced by one of Aemma. 
          And things I noticed is, body language. Aegon on the throne seems nervous since he "play" with his fingers kinda like Alicent did, Rhaenyra still touch her ring when anxious and so on. Oh yeah, and in contrary of Rhaenyra where in my story she still have her thing going with Harwin, Alicent will be exclusive to Aerys. (My guy Criston didn't even appreciate her ) 
          
          What did you think of it? 
          
          So the plan is to watch the episode when I can, rewatch everything once their all out. Then going back to writing. 
          
          Was just a lil update, hope you guys are doing okay. 

Obsidian0

Yop, 
          
          I'm finally able to follow people, just needed to install uninstall and update my phone. Tried to follow the people that support me, if I forgotten you, you are welcome to notify me so that I can follow you, you know? Kinda wanna be close with the people that support me and work I like. 
          
          As you can see in "Recommendations" I recently got a knack on celebs's stories, those are an enjoyable genre to read, wanna one day try my hand at one, but I don't see myself writing one. 
          
          Take care people, wishing you a good watch for season 2 and a good read for people coming on the story, will notify you once I'm starting to work on it. 

Obsidian0

Sup' guys, hope you're all doing ok, 
          
          
          Just finished 'The Witcher' trilogy, after months of play and did the Wild Hunt's extensions for the first time, Syanna will probably be an addition to the LI. 
          
          For Shin Hati's story I haven't made any progress. 
          Found the start of an Overlord story on my computer, would you like me to post it? It's not much for the moment, just Bio, informations and the start of chapter one I never finished, but for the moment I am not in the mood to write about Overlord, so yeah if I publish it, it'll most likely be just the core of it and will never be finished. 
          
          
          Concerning "A Dragon's Wrath", here another int:
          
          "Viserys Targaryen, Second of his name. No different from his namesake, he seems to have inherited his weak constitution and .... people remember him as 'The Good', mostly remembered for .... ultimately it is known that relation between father and son was rocky to say the least ...."
          
          - "History & Life Of The True Conqueror" 
          - By Grand Maester Boris, Elder of The Citadel
          
          
          

Obsidian0

@ Obsidian0  Hope you enjoy the little thing, I plan to do this when I post. 
            I wanted to have few words about my future as a 'writer', I have some ideas but I don't know if I'll never give life to them, kinda saying what I already said. For now my focus is just on finishing "A Dragon's Wrath", I don't know if I'll continue to write after it. Becoming an author put on evidence the harsh reality it is, it's difficult. At least to me and the fact I am not a native english speaker make everything more difficult, for example in my tongue I know how to form my thoughts, but once I need to convert them to english I have difficulties to do so. So yeah, I may have some ideas and talk about them but don't have your hopes up. Will certainly put a book named "Ideas", if I'm not continuing writing, this way if some people want it they could take from it. 
            
            
            I just hope you will not be disappointed with what I'm cooking for the rest of "A Dragon's Wrath". 
            
            
            
            
            Stay safe folks, hope next time I post 'round here it'll be to announce I start to write the rest of "A Dragon's Wrath". 
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Obsidian0

Hello, 
          
          How are you all? Have you seen season 2 trailer? 
          
          
          I did, poor Halaena living the same as Alicent again :c (in my story she'll not be wed to Aegon though), Alicent finally have interactions with Halaena but at what cost? 
          Felt kind of weird, I don't know how to say, Aegon is the enemy yet they focus A LOT on Alicent-Rhaenyra, will see, I'll probably give my thoughts here from time to time. 
          
          
          
          On another note, started to make research about Yi Ti, and oh boy... WE'RE IN FOR A RIDE! I'll try to do it justice as best as I can. And like I did before, during the process of writing I'll post update here from time to time. For the schedule I am large since I gave myself until the year's end, march as worse, but it may or may not happen. Just wanting you to know, as for the writing the couple of chapters will be most likely done on computer since taking information and writing on phone is a hassle. 
          
          And tell me what you think, I had an idea that when I'll post I'll throw away some bones, for example now I give you one: when Viserys II will ask to Rhaenyra if he loves him, he's talking about Aerys, their father-son relationship will be difficult. 
          
          
          
          
          Oh and I don't remember if I said it, but I completely gave up on the FF 16 story, don't know much, only played like 3 FF games in my life, and I don't want to just write a plain and boring story. (It was for Benedicta Armann, hell I probably misspelled her name lmao) 
          
          For the Shin Hati story I have the character name, title, his alignment with the force and his side (basically the character will always be in Shin's side, whatever may happen, oh and yes, the story will be purely about the oc and Shin for the romance side, no harem, no Sabine, no Ashoka coming in the way), that's all I have for the moment
          
          
          
          Thanks for everything, loving, commenting, reading or even passing by. 
          
          Much love and take care guys! 

Obsidian0

Hi, 
          
          
          Don't know how the notifications works since I didn't post in a while, so yeah here it is, hope you will like it. 
          And if you have any questions before asking, please read the notes at the end. 
          
          
          
          That's all, take care of yourself and loved ones. 

Obsidian0

@GHOSTOFDEATH2001 
          
           Hi, 
          
          Yes it is being worked on. Just me having less motivation to write, procrastination and life in general, making my writing session small. (I just write between 200-600 words when I decide to write) 
          Making the release far, but like stated would like to release it this month. 
          Will put the slow update tag once the new chapter come out, although for the new season dunno since my story will be much different, so no waiting season 2.
           And if the story isn't finished by then it will most likely give me a motivational boost to write, will put the future in the note at the end of the chapter. (I encourage you and the people to read it, I give my thoughts on what I write and plan for the story) 
          
          Hope you will have a pleasant read or had one.
          Take care