Obsidian0

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Yo,
          	
          	Just published a story after a while, hope you will enjoy it and wattpad didn't fuck me over. (bugged couldn't send it from my phone so did from computer, the writing is hybrid too, some made on computer some on phone, so if it looks weird you have your answer)
          	
          	Take care, all.

Obsidian0

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Yo,
          
          Just published a story after a while, hope you will enjoy it and wattpad didn't fuck me over. (bugged couldn't send it from my phone so did from computer, the writing is hybrid too, some made on computer some on phone, so if it looks weird you have your answer)
          
          Take care, all.

Obsidian0

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IMPORTANT 
          
          Hello and sorry for this alarming post, but to me you deserve to know, I am deeply sorry for the inconvenience. 
          
          So to put it simply I lost a huge chunk of work. 
          
          In details: few days ago Wattpad disconnected me and made me reconnect, not weird until now. I felt like writing a bit, you see where I am going? Wattpad lost a non negligible part of my advancement. Opted for three very lengthy chapter, I was at the first, it's not much but almost half of it is gone and Wattpad's saves are barely making my loss any better. It goes without saying that I haven't done shit the last set of weeks but this? This is an enormous blow. 
          It doesn't end there: my phone lost things too, I looked around and I lost: musics, pictures and personal ones as well. Out of the pictures outside of the personal ones they were all dedicated to this story, from croped things to retouched gif to fit Wattpad. I lost more than half of them. This problem is in no case related to Wattpad, a year or two ago my phone already had storage problems at times. I thought it was solved but clearly not. And no. I am not an idiot, I looked if I had space left, I legit have more than 10go to spare. So how? 
          
          With these events adding up it goes without saying my will to write was near zero and now had gone through the window. 
          I will see with the deadline I set up in March, if I can't find a solution till then, well you can consider this story discontinued from me, even writing done for me I guess. I'll make it known with another post if it happens. 
          IF IT HAPPENS another book will appear, a book of ideas for some fellows author or whoever want them. Just probably be credited. x) 
          
          Once again deeply sorry for the people which enjoys my writing but I don't think I can. 
          
          Happy new year, have a nice day/night, take care! 
          

Obsidian0

@ AnotherSlav0113  you wound me mate XD, I just want to be perfectly transparent with the people and if at some point someone may wander where the next chapter comes they have the answer. 
            
            Thanks for the kinds words tho, appreciate it my guy. 
            
            
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AnotherSlav0113

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@Obsidian0 Well… I think it’s about time I finally say something. Listen, man… if you think I—or anyone else—just wakes up brimming with ideas, that’s not how it works. Lately, I just sit at my computer, write whatever pops into my head, and I’m honestly surprised anyone even likes it. Writing is tricky—it takes time. Time that most people would rather spend doing anything else than waiting for some idiot to pull another chapter out of his ass.
            
            Nobody’s going to come up to you and tell you how great of a job you did. But there are people out there who genuinely look forward to what you create. Some are absolutely hooked on your story. And hey, if you wanna discuss some shit, let me know. I might not know everything or understand it all, but I’ll try.
            
            I’m not here to give advice—I’ve dealt out hits in the past, and honestly, I probably won’t change :DD. But whatever you decide, take your time. When you’re ready, whether it’s for a comeback or to move on, we’ll be here waiting for you
            
            Jayce
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Obsidian0

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Oh, 
          
          It has been a while hmm? 
          
          Not gonna lie, I almost forgot I had a story going on, the last few weeks I didn't work on it, I'm struggling with personal stuff and got back into playing, no modding more than playing Skyrim XD. I'm writing more in my own head than anywhere else if that make any sense. 
          
          Wanted to put a turbo since I had thought about it, rather than having everything for late March I wanted to challenge myself for a release around December, like a 'Christmas gift' from me if you would call it that... but yeah, while try to keep you updated. 
          You can thanks  Redhodd20, received notifications of his messages, I think it would have gone to oblivion without him since I'm not much around nowadays. 
          
          As for the chapter, I'm still trying to see if I go for 3 long ones or I cut the three in... three, making it nine chapters for the end. 
          
          Hint of 'the day' is: "I was your age when I conquered them, now it's your turn [...]" a conversation between Aerys and his children. 
          
          So yeah, take care.
          
          (Nah, I can't fucking wait to get back into writing 'actively' I have a whole thing planned between Aerys & Alicent. 
          Aerys will enter a more serious and 'darker' path ahead of him, I wouldn't call it darker but if you know you know. 
          Alicent will become precious to him. <3
          
          And done, I will not give you anything else, hope everyone will enjoy or find something positive about the whole story at the end.) 

Obsidian0

Yoooooo, 
          
          Some updates and honesty. 
          
          So, this season while not writing about the Dance put a punch to my already crished motivation to write. 
          
          I mean come on, Alicent-Rhaenyra is hugely forced, Rhaenyra's motherhood where has it gone? This season should have been to avenge Luc and we had nothing... Yet she took Jae's head, so how does "a son for a son" still apply!? And in what world Alicent would sold her own children off??? Imagine if in Game Of Thrones the feud between Stark-Lannister had been solved by Cersei offering Jeoffrey's head?? The fact that Lahor has been genderbent, what for? The whole Daemon's arc while being useless could have been better if they exploited Laena more, made Harwin come back to confront him by the fact he failed to protect Rhaenyra and Lucerys, or even made something with Luc. So many possibilities, plus they already butchered everything so why not actually try to do something thta can be good and logical!? And i stand on my hill, his Harrenhall arc is useless, the concluaion is literally what we know since s1. 
          
          For the honesty part, this week i could have worked a lot on the story but didn't do anything, didn't use my notes nor anything really. So, like i said I'll try to keep my word to have everything ready before march 2025. Will see what happens and how everything plays out on my end. 
          
          Take care all. Amd thanks to the people which are sticking up with me. (:
          Hopefully your patience will be rewarded for something that'll be worth it. 

Zacharycox1210Cox

I have questions for you When is the next chapter dragon wrath going  come out And is aerys 1 targaryen going to have blackfire 

Obsidian0

@ Zacharycox1210Cox  Hi, 
            
            Like i said, i gave myself a deadline till march 2025, and it will not be a single chapter but a mass release to finish the story. It while take time, i need to form a text with my notes, and lazyness/procrastination is getting the best out of me xD.
             Depends on the last episode of the season since i took a few things out of the show to put them in the book, for the moment it's not looking good since the season is a disappointment for me, gonna watch it through the week and give my final thoughts about the season then rewatch it to start writing the rest of the story. 
            
            As for Blackfyre i still dont know, Aerys already have a valyrian sword of his own and the blade of his prosthesis, she will probably go to one of his son or... a daughter, or even given to Daemon, who knows.
            
            As for your question on LOTR, yeah watched it years ago, and no i don't plan any story for it. 
            
            Thanks for your interest and take care. 
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Obsidian0

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Hi, 
          
          Just wanna share my thoughts about s2... and my interest for the moment has died out, I mean:
          
          - Lucerys was a turning point for everything, no one mention him;
          
          - Rhaenyra literally doing nothing, never speak back, hell even her children shit on her, only times when she dared to talk were with Daemon Corlys and Rhaenys, but with 2 out of 3 out.... complaining about the fact to not be a boy and blablabla when Viserys would never have held her back to do what she wanted, and ironically her not being a boy and him having Aemond and Aegon while he neglected them...;
          
          - Daeron's introduction is garbage, Alicent seem to literally have learned his existence on the spot, should have been introduced in s1 with a pregnant belly or when Otto came back from Old Town talking about him...;
          
          - Daemond in his haunted mansion is meh while taking a good hunch of it, I've seen people complain about him fucking Alyssa, IT IS POSSIBLE since in s1 him and Viserys talk about their parents (so, her and Baelon) so no, in the show she don't seem to have died when he was 3 and little Aegon doesn't seem canon either;
          
          - dragons and costumes are looking awful as fuck, in s1 we had Alicent wearing superb attire, same could be said for Rhaenys... now everyone except Simon just wear shit. 
          For dragons, in s1 I found the scene of Rhaenyra-Syrax flying above King's Landing looking like shit, somehow they made it worst for Aegon-Sunfyre, Meleys looked like a big ass pineapple, Vhagar like a Komodo... last but not least Rook's Rest looked like shit, the saddles were taking almost half of the screen, HELLO WHAT CAN I SEE!? 
          
          

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@ Obsidian0  - too much focus on dragonseed, they should have been introduced at Jacaerys calling, not before... 
            
            - and so on... 
            
            From a TV spectator standpoint, yeah, this season is mid, at least to me. Although it still give me ideas to implement in my story.
            
            Oh and what would you like Aerys-Aegon's relationship to be? I don't know, my boy Aegon (even Aemond) need a father figure, but at the same time I want Aerys to found a sort of friendship he never had, the brotherhood he wished. For Daeron, I think I'll write him as a mix of father figure and brother. 
            Really liked Daemon's scene... who knows... maybe Aerys will be visited by Aemma... "My favorite child" or something..... 
            
            
            Tell me what you think and stay safe. 
            
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Oi oi lovelies, 
          
          Watched the 1st episode of s2, it gave me ideas to incorporate.
          
          For example we see briefly Halaena's drawings about her dreams, I think it'll be interesting for her to talk about them with Aerys and why not even learning the news of him being her father this way. 
          There's Viserys's statue, it'll probably be replaced by one of Aemma. 
          And things I noticed is, body language. Aegon on the throne seems nervous since he "play" with his fingers kinda like Alicent did, Rhaenyra still touch her ring when anxious and so on. Oh yeah, and in contrary of Rhaenyra where in my story she still have her thing going with Harwin, Alicent will be exclusive to Aerys. (My guy Criston didn't even appreciate her ) 
          
          What did you think of it? 
          
          So the plan is to watch the episode when I can, rewatch everything once their all out. Then going back to writing. 
          
          Was just a lil update, hope you guys are doing okay. 

Obsidian0

Yop, 
          
          I'm finally able to follow people, just needed to install uninstall and update my phone. Tried to follow the people that support me, if I forgotten you, you are welcome to notify me so that I can follow you, you know? Kinda wanna be close with the people that support me and work I like. 
          
          As you can see in "Recommendations" I recently got a knack on celebs's stories, those are an enjoyable genre to read, wanna one day try my hand at one, but I don't see myself writing one. 
          
          Take care people, wishing you a good watch for season 2 and a good read for people coming on the story, will notify you once I'm starting to work on it. 

Obsidian0

Sup' guys, hope you're all doing ok, 
          
          
          Just finished 'The Witcher' trilogy, after months of play and did the Wild Hunt's extensions for the first time, Syanna will probably be an addition to the LI. 
          
          For Shin Hati's story I haven't made any progress. 
          Found the start of an Overlord story on my computer, would you like me to post it? It's not much for the moment, just Bio, informations and the start of chapter one I never finished, but for the moment I am not in the mood to write about Overlord, so yeah if I publish it, it'll most likely be just the core of it and will never be finished. 
          
          
          Concerning "A Dragon's Wrath", here another int:
          
          "Viserys Targaryen, Second of his name. No different from his namesake, he seems to have inherited his weak constitution and .... people remember him as 'The Good', mostly remembered for .... ultimately it is known that relation between father and son was rocky to say the least ...."
          
          - "History & Life Of The True Conqueror" 
          - By Grand Maester Boris, Elder of The Citadel
          
          
          

Obsidian0

@ Obsidian0  Hope you enjoy the little thing, I plan to do this when I post. 
            I wanted to have few words about my future as a 'writer', I have some ideas but I don't know if I'll never give life to them, kinda saying what I already said. For now my focus is just on finishing "A Dragon's Wrath", I don't know if I'll continue to write after it. Becoming an author put on evidence the harsh reality it is, it's difficult. At least to me and the fact I am not a native english speaker make everything more difficult, for example in my tongue I know how to form my thoughts, but once I need to convert them to english I have difficulties to do so. So yeah, I may have some ideas and talk about them but don't have your hopes up. Will certainly put a book named "Ideas", if I'm not continuing writing, this way if some people want it they could take from it. 
            
            
            I just hope you will not be disappointed with what I'm cooking for the rest of "A Dragon's Wrath". 
            
            
            
            
            Stay safe folks, hope next time I post 'round here it'll be to announce I start to write the rest of "A Dragon's Wrath". 
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