ObsidianFlyer

Okay, I really hate to be rude... But yes I believe that this way (book 2) will bring your story to its full incredible potential... It's a great idea but it's been rushed and therefore the plot is falling apart. I can't wait to read the original planned version! You have the potential to be an incredible author! Or maybe you have the skills and I just haven't seen them in this book. Thank u for your time... 
          	Gotta_Fly

JuicyLunaaa

Heeeeyy!:)
           I was wondering if you wouldn't mind checking out my story? It is called "The Distant Lark" and I started writing it recently so the Storyline is developing. It is basically about love and secrets. There is so much Drama and lies that I think the suspense to come will be likeable. HOPEFULLY you like it enough to add it to your reading list, maybe? Fingers crossed ✌
          Feel free to vote and comment, just... enjoy the journey :3

ObsidianFlyer

Okay, I really hate to be rude... But yes I believe that this way (book 2) will bring your story to its full incredible potential... It's a great idea but it's been rushed and therefore the plot is falling apart. I can't wait to read the original planned version! You have the potential to be an incredible author! Or maybe you have the skills and I just haven't seen them in this book. Thank u for your time... 
          Gotta_Fly