I love how you said something like, "Don't push me on updating my chapters because I'm going to take my sweet ass time to get my first time just right." I don't remember from word to word but thats when I fell in love with your story. I wanna read it all right now but apparently its going to have to wait. :'(
No problemo, its a good start with very great detail. I like how you switched the two so the guy is like the smart one (I'm not sure thats the right word but I'll go with it) and she is the carefree one. :D
Hey there! :D would you mind checking out my story - 'Something Different' - and commenting on what you think of it? (: I'd love that and would happily do the same if you want (:
I got volleyball practice for awhile this whole week, I'll be posting Pure Velvet and The Golden Heir soon. I've just been super busy, there isn't enough time in the world! I'll do my best, I love you all for being so patient.