@OceanSpindrift
hey,
thank you for peeking into my gallery. ;)
@Amaze_onetrustno You're welcome! I love just looking at cover makers and graphic artists even if I don't actually order something from them.
Thanks so much for voting and commenting on Cutthroat Ink! I hope you continue to enjoy! :)
@Wendizzy Your welcome! I haven't had much time to continue reading it but I'm enjoying it so far.
Banca I'm next to you :3
Heyyy,
thanks for adding Loving Mayhem to your reading list. I hope one day you can read it!! and tell me what you think about it. :D
I would like to learn any type of martial arts! <3
have a nice day!! :) :D <3
@OceanSpindrift aww, thanks. Ikr. I want to do many things which I don't have time for. xD
@lucferase It looks really interesting and I hope I can read it one day too! It might take a while, but I'll get around to reading it if it's the last thing I do! Yeah, me too. I'd like to learn martial arts especially Kung Fu but I don't think I can fit that into my schedule just yet.
You mentioned you want all the help you can get. A free account on grammerly can really help with spelling mistakes and grammar! I use this a lot
@-moiety- BTW, thanks for checking out my story! It's still in its draft stages and there's still a lot of room for improvement.
@-moiety- I actually do use this website. I already installed it on Chrome and it is really useful! Sometimes Microsoft Word just doesn't catch everything.
Hey!
Will you please check out "Distance is also Vital."
@flowe_rgirl I checked it out and it sounds interesting. Although I don't have the time right now to read it but I did check out the first chapter and by skimming it, there should be a space after every comma or full stop. I'll read everything when I have time though.
Hey, thanks so much for adding "Edit like an Editor" to your library. It means a lot to me! I hope you enjoy and benefit from my book. :)
Also, your fantasy book looks super cool. I'll have to check it out in my free time! :)
Happy reading and writing,
Jen xo
@OceanSpindrift Wow! Thank you so much for your brilliant criticism! I really appreciate it; you have no idea! It took me a few revisions to finally decide on a not-so-happy, but realistic, ending. I think it's more fitting for Alissa, because it allowed me to continue her story with an exciting, fresh start in my current fiction, "More Than She Can Chew." Thank you, again. Seriously, you're awesome!! :) xoxo
@jgfairytales It hooked me in immediately from the first chapter! I had a love-hate feeling with the last chapter because it just shows that not everything has a happy ending but it made me sad at the same time. I'm not saying you should change it though, it's great the way it is! Although one paragraph kinda bugged me and it was when it described how they were changing because every sentence started with pronouns. The way you wrote it felt a bit broken and the thoughts were choppy. Usually I would be annoyed, but the way you made it into shorter chapters was probably a good idea because it didn't make me lose interest and I felt like I wanted to read more.
@OceanSpindrift Also, I see you read and voted (thank you!) on my novella, "Stability." What did you think of it? (Please give as little or as much of your opinion as you want. I don't want to pressure you, but I appreciate honesty and constructive criticism.)
Honestly, I can relate to a lot of things from your bio <3
Thank you! And which bio did you mean? Because I just updated it yesterday and it hasn't changed on my laptop.
Thanks so much for checking out the intro to my sequel, Darkness Falls. I really appreciate it, and thanks for your kind words as well.
I really love your bio. It's relatable. :)
