Octana-00

Having some ideas for other fics but I wanted that my will to do something worked on it too....‍♀️

Mrs_Kindle

Can I ask you a favor? It's about reviewing a book (Hollow Knight fanfic to be exact) I just want to spot problems since you seem honest with critisicim! I have one on here and one on quotev(the one I'm currently working on and would like you to review) but I want to know which one you're up for reading first if any at all. Thanks in advance!

Mrs_Kindle

@PatrinneTSSilva
            Ahhh OK. I think I get what you mean now. I'll see where I can put that especially now that everyone will have to be reintroduced to Pale King. And he too will have to be reintroduced to the kingdom. Its gonna be a wild ride for everyone
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Octana-00

@Mrs_Kindle You don't have to change anything for now, what I meant was there are moments that a seasoned warrior is better than a rookie, sorry for the misunderstanding, I should have been more specific, sorry again. But better reveal the fact that the reader is still young when the opportunity arises.
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Mrs_Kindle

Uhh also could you tell me what these moments are and suggestions about how I can fix them?
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