OfTheOneOnly

Hi everyone, I'm sorry for posting so many announcements. I have a request for you all, if you don't mind.
          	
          	I'm trying to improve my skills as a story teller/writer. I would appreciate (and really need) some constructive criticisms from you guys. How can I make the chapters flows better or do I keep it the same? Is my current style satisfactory or should it be more illustrative, or narrative, for better engagement? Are my characters fleshed out, lacking in personality, unlikable, or too deviant from the original? Do my explanations/lore make sense? 
          	
          	Just a bit of advice or critic each chapter can help. Thank you for your time, patience/support, and understanding.

OfTheOneOnly

Hi everyone, I'm sorry for posting so many announcements. I have a request for you all, if you don't mind.
          
          I'm trying to improve my skills as a story teller/writer. I would appreciate (and really need) some constructive criticisms from you guys. How can I make the chapters flows better or do I keep it the same? Is my current style satisfactory or should it be more illustrative, or narrative, for better engagement? Are my characters fleshed out, lacking in personality, unlikable, or too deviant from the original? Do my explanations/lore make sense? 
          
          Just a bit of advice or critic each chapter can help. Thank you for your time, patience/support, and understanding.

OfTheOneOnly

You might have gotten notifications about chapters being published. Please ignore those, they are not new uploads. I simply changed the format, grammar, and descriptions for consistency. An actual update will happen by December 16th along with an author's note for clarification on the story. Sorry for the inconvenience/confusion.

OfTheOneOnly

Okay, what do know - I actually finished the new chapter today as well. My estimate was way off, but in a good way. That's cool.
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fireysword

Omg you returned, I read your book even after you stopped posting. You inspired me to post my stories for teen wolf and old fairytail books. I absolutely adore your story.

OfTheOneOnly

@fireysword I'm trying to make my writing better. A few years back, after my story was reported, I decided to reevaluate what I was doing. In hindsight, it really sucked. 
            That's not to say it's now remarkably better, but I'm definitely working on it. I'm not as invested so it'll take a while to get through everything.  I hope you'll stick around.
            It always amazes me how I somehow inspired people to start writing, but then I remembered that's exactly how I got started. So, I really appreciate being a sort of catalyst to your creativity. One piece of advice: read more than you write first. It definitely helps in the long run.
            Thanks for staying with my story after all these years. It means a lot - you have no idea.
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reydelosdragones

Hi, I'm fans of your satan salamander story, but these last days I can't find the page and the story that happened, could you tell me so I can continue reading

reydelosdragones

you are wrong friend many read your stories many wait for you to continue with your stories
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OfTheOneOnly

@reydelosdragones Well, that story got reported and taken down on another website, so I will try to re-edit it on all platforms. I don't know how long it's going to take. Seeing it get taken down really put a damper on my mood. I'm sorry if this is an inconvenience for you - I honestly didn't think anyone read my stories anymore since I update really slow.
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palrastein

Hey buddy, would you like to work with me to create a story?

palrastein

@sinnerofall umm, hello
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sinnerofall

@Unholy-flames hmm
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palrastein

Is that okay with you?
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palrastein

Hey buddy, I just rewrite my FT x HS DxD book! Could you read it, criticize it, and ask me if something doesn't make sense? And you don't have too if you don't want to.

palrastein

Okay.
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OfTheOneOnly

@Unholy-flames thanks and we'll talk later. I'm in the middle of something.
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palrastein

And i hope good things will happen to you.
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