OfficialPaleKing8008

Hey dude, okay so first of I got good news!
          	Me and my class are going on a field trip to Boston! And were spending a whole WEEK there for spring break
          	But anyway, I wanted to tell you, I've decided that while I might, if I want to, start writing that star wars story right now, I'm think ill probably just wait till summer comes so I can not only think of more of the story and really flesh out the characters, but also because ill have more free time to work on it.
          	But I would like to ask you (I think I have already asked this but just in case) do you have any tips for writing, specifically on writing characters, as while I'm good with environments I have abit of trouble with characters.

Sane-Person2

Yo pal, you been doing okay?

Sane-Person2

@OfficialPaleKing8008 Yeah, I’m doing okay. Lost my second account, but somehow recovered my first one. Meaning I can work on my original works. But I plan on migrating my works from my second account to this one.
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OfficialPaleKing8008

@Sane-Person2 Sorry I haven't responded in a while, wattpad on my phone is hugging out and I've been too lazy too check it on my tablet, anyway yeah I'm doing pretty fine, everything okay with you?
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OfficialPaleKing8008

Hey dude, okay so first of I got good news!
          Me and my class are going on a field trip to Boston! And were spending a whole WEEK there for spring break
          But anyway, I wanted to tell you, I've decided that while I might, if I want to, start writing that star wars story right now, I'm think ill probably just wait till summer comes so I can not only think of more of the story and really flesh out the characters, but also because ill have more free time to work on it.
          But I would like to ask you (I think I have already asked this but just in case) do you have any tips for writing, specifically on writing characters, as while I'm good with environments I have abit of trouble with characters.

Sane-Person

Quick question, do ya own a PS5

Sane-Person

@OfficialPaleKing8008 Just keep those grades up. (I know you can do it.)
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OfficialPaleKing8008

@Sane-Person yeah :(
            Though my parents said if I I can keep my grades in good condition, they will get me a PC so, maybe soon  
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Sane-Person

@OfficialPaleKing8008 Aw bugger, if ya did I was gonna ask if you had Helldivers 2 because I got it recently and I wanted to see if ya wanted to play. But since you only have the ps4, guess we can’t.
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Sane-Person

Yo I have a… suggestive question. Since Jack (Frostpunk story) is technically gonna have lovers, should I gender-bend anyone?
          
          I thought of some, but I’m not certain. So I’d like to hear your thoughts of this matter.

OfficialPaleKing8008

@Sane-Person ah truly a cultured fellow.
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Sane-Person

@OfficialPaleKing8008 I know that a reference, but my mind just goes to Pootis Engage.
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OfficialPaleKing8008

@Sane-Person my minds tellin me no~
            But my body!
            My body's telling me yeees~
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Sane-Person

Hey, I have a question: I had recently published chapter 9 (I think) of Order & Faith (Hazbin hotel and Frostpunk story cross over). My next chapter with be Jack’s first time in Hell, but In having a hard time thinking where he should go. I’m think he could go to the gluttony ring first, crashing into one of Bee’s party’s or fall into the pride ring and crash into Carmilla’s house.
          
          What do you think? 

Sane-Person

I do understand your point about Bee and Carmilla. Bee is a sin lord while Carmilla is an overlord, but both had completely different personalities. Bee is more of that fun aunt that’ll spoil the crap out of you. While Carmella is a serious, strict parent. Just picture how their interactions will be with Jack.
            
            ….
            
            …
            
            ….
            
            Have you pictured the scenarios? Okay, now Jack isn’t just gonna crash to the ground and the people shouted, "SWEET SAM HILL! A HUMAN!". Nah, I have a little thing cooked up for him. Say, you know how hellhounds can turn into their human forms? I’ll leave it at that. But, Jack isn’t gonna be… himself. Not saying he’s gonna have a split personality, but rather having his subconscious mind take control while he blabbers on about negative things about himself. 
            
            Here are some I thought of.
            "Couldn’t save them… may own parents."
            "Why, why did you do those things..?"
            "HURTS! EVERYTHING HURTS!"
            "LAIR LAIR LAIR LAIR LAAAAIIIRRRRRR!!!"
            "Everything is cold. So cold…"
            
            Remember, this is his subconscious talking. I really am leaning more to Bees’s interaction first. But I’ll save Carmilla’s Carmilla’s interaction when Jack does meet her. But my decision may change at a later date, who knows.
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OfficialPaleKing8008

@Sane-Person  Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm what if he just crashed into a meeting between the overlords of Hell? That is just my idea, but to answer your question with the choices given to me...I would say Carmilla would be better as Bee is literally a deadly sin and I feel like you should hold out showing those char echoed cause of how strong they are.
            This is just my opinion I'm just saying.
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Sane-Person

How’s your day going? Mine just started. 

Sane-Person

If you have a more better idea on the Star Wars, I recommend that one. The first steps to making a story can be a bit alarming. But I have been reading some star wars stories, so I say you should do the Star Wars story. 
            
            (I have been writing a bit and had published a chapter on my Frostpunk story. Making some progress.)
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OfficialPaleKing8008

@Sane-Person Eh fine, hey I gotta ask, for my first story should I do a star wars story or a Hollow Knight story, I'm leaning more towards star wars cause I've had a good idea for a story for a while but maybe the Hollow knight one would be better I just can't decide, what do you think?
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Sane-Person

How’s your day going? I’m currently experiencing snow where I am. 
          
          (My mind thinks of Frostpunk)

Sane-Person

@OfficialPaleKing8008 No, your fine. It actually made me chuckle a bit.
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OfficialPaleKing8008

@Sane-Person  they're just "chill" like that.
            
            :D
            ...
            :I
            ...
            :(
            Yeah that was bad sorry. <:(
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Sane-Person

@OfficialPaleKing8008 I think we got 12 inches of snow. Haven’t went outside yet. 
            
            I’m just wondering how the scout teams do it.
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Sane-Person

Just a random question: which side did you pick in Frostpunk? Order or Faith?

OfficialPaleKing8008

@Sane-Person Congratulations my friend with your help and devotion the city has survived...
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            But for how much longer?
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Sane-Person

@OfficialPaleKing8008 A bit late for that warning. I was able to beat the storm, though I did sacrifice a few lives to keep the mines running. (Their sacrifice was not in vain.)
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OfficialPaleKing8008

@Sane-Person THE STORM IS COMING THE STORM IS COMING THE STORM IS COMING THE STORM IS COMING THE STORM IS COMING THE STORM IS COMING THE STORM IS COMING THE STORM IS COMING THE STORM IS COMING THE STORM IS COMING THE STORM IS COMING THE STORM IS COMING THE STORM IS COMING THE STORM IS COMING THE STORM IS COMING THE STORM IS COMING.
            Prepare...
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Sane-Person

Just recently played a little bit of Frostpunk. It’s quite the experience, both good and terrible. 

OfficialPaleKing8008

@Sane-Person Here's a little advice for maybe a little later game: stack up as MUCH food and as MUCH coal as you can cause trust me...
            YOU'RE GONNA NEED IT.
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