Hey! I usually don't do this but would you read my fan fic on my other account? I haven't done much yet but I would really appreciate the support! I love your fan fic "Obstacles" and can't wait for your zayn fan fic ;) Anyways my other account is hazza_is_magnificent and it's called "In the Rain."
@HeatherBright well I guess just read other mystery books and see their approach. Put yourself in the reader's shoes and think, would they be able to guess? Just the build up I guess, don't give too much away in one chapter? Sorry not too sure how to help!