Okamimimi

Hello to everyone that used to read my story "Voices", I'm back and I've decided to redo the story but I want to actually complete this one. I just posted the new chapter 1 (I've kept the older chapters to see my old story mistakes) titled "a new beginning". I do hope it's better than the original first few chapters and I'd love for any and all errors to be pointed out so that I may fix them and grow from them. Thank you for sparing time to read my story.
          	Much love,
          	Afropuffs

Okamimimi

Hello to everyone that used to read my story "Voices", I'm back and I've decided to redo the story but I want to actually complete this one. I just posted the new chapter 1 (I've kept the older chapters to see my old story mistakes) titled "a new beginning". I do hope it's better than the original first few chapters and I'd love for any and all errors to be pointed out so that I may fix them and grow from them. Thank you for sparing time to read my story.
          Much love,
          Afropuffs