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What do you think of the historical and philosophical touches in my story?
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Japan, 1800s — late afternoon.
A dirt path. A wooden fence. A boy with red hair, crouched in the shade of a tree, watching a butterfly land on his hand.
His smile was small — content.
Then—
Shouts.
“Monster!”
“Demon child!”
Keiko looked up just in time to see the first stone fly.
It hit his shoulder.
The second struck his cheek — splitting skin.
He didn’t cry.
He just watched them — village children, faces twisted with fear. Mothers dragging them away. Whispers like blades.
“He burned the rice field just by walking past it.”
“His eyes… they’re cursed.”
That night, his mother washed the blood from his face with shaking hands.
His father stood guard at the door, sword in hand, silent.
“You have to stay hidden now,” she whispered. “Promise us.”
Keiko looked at them — eyes glowing faintly even in the dark.
“I promise.”
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Ok now my harem consist on
Mirko
Ryukyu
Midnight
Mount lady
Lady nagant
That’s it
I don’t want to add anyone else
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What do you guys think of the Kairi character?
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For the ones who’s have read”Akaito the first real her” you’re welcome to give some of your ideas for the next chapters
I honestly want keiko to get a harem but if you don’t is ok
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Maybe I add a flashback , lady nagant on a rooftop Shooting some criminals, then in the rooftop appears keiko wearing black pants, boots, a red hoodie, his hair loose and sunglasses, she shoot him but he catches the bullet with his hand, that scared her, she’s about to fall but he catches her and , she ask why he saved her, and he said that he could feel it, the fear, the hatred, she is not a bad person.
And he disappears
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Ok, if you read both my story ideas and the one I made in fanfiction
You’re free to make them, and if you’re interested in ideas for the chapters of the stories, you can come to me if you want