okiegirl

Thank you for following! And to answer your question about wattpad errors/weird stuff, yeah, I had some issues with the website (reads disappearing), but it looks like the wattpad team has it under control now.

@Okiegirl323 Nothing like that, but I do have a little but of trouble with syncing sometimes. Hope it gets better!

I have enjoyed reading your story "It Couldn't Be", and so far it's sequel. I think you have some really good ideas. I hope you continue writing. Great job.

Merry christmas and a happy new to you too.  I love your stories.
          
          Carol.
          
            

Merry Christmas! And Happy New Year!

You're more than welcome for the comment. I call it how it is, and I thought you had talent. Very excited to see what else you write.

@MarvelousThings I think I love you. In a totally non awkward way of course. Lol Thank you so much. I really had little to no faith in this story and to read what you posted just made my day. I've a long way to go when it comes to writing, but with people like you and so many of my other fans, I have the motivation to keep trying, and improving, because I would never want to disappoint any of you. Thank you so much that honestly made my day.

I admire the way you write your stories in a way that the reader only thinks and feels exactly what you want them to. You have us at your mercy and as a fan who greedily wants more and more, it can be slightly frustrating. But in reality, it's a true testament to your ability and I think you should feel very proud of your writing voice.

@Aimster24 @SketchiDragon  Thank you both. She said my story was hard to read and that it should read like a movie, like the twilight books. :( However I never want my stories to be as shallow as a movie. My stories may suck or may have a slow start, but I like to have a lot of depth in my stories. She did give some great advice on how to improve my story but that wasnt one of them. Thanks again guys. You made me smile!

Reads like a movie... What does that even mean? Books came before movies and movies like twilight and harry potter are scripted to follow the book almost word for word. If anything I would think that means your story is easy to read, flows well and people can get a mental picture from your description. That means you are doing a great job! Don't take it as a bad... It's a good thing. 
          
          I like Set in Stone please continue. Vampire stories these days don't talk much about possession or glamouring like older ones did. This is a refreshing story also in that Master is not bedding her in the first few chapters.  
          
          Your writing is publish worthy if you ask me. I read a bunch on WP and many have good story lines but bad execution so it's unclear. I don't get that from your stories. Also there are a ton of young readers on here and inexperience is high so please take comments with a grain of salt.