Okunagashi

It's my first fanfiction! So plz read it and give ur opinion pliz! Thank you ~ 
          I just published "Last Mission" of my story "Play: Soul Eater, Transfer Kids (あいのゆめ)". http://my.w.tt/UiNb/OuXQvBkX3z

Hi hi~ i open for any comment either advice, Please read my story~ thx!