@Old-man-river
Sorry to bother you, I just released a new chapter and I wanted your opinion on it.
@ Old-man-river When you have it I would like a slightly better answer to dictate for the future of the narrative.
Did you.... Like my story? Thank you, you are a sweetheart.
@ Old-man-river Regarding your second suggestion, I don't really know, whether in my head the melody or the devil in the music is something hidden, it's a secret that no one knows or should know, this is a good excuse to keep everything inside Hell's Gate City without relying on already established narrative elements of Hazbin Hotel, which is my most original story and can work within this hell without relying on it. That's why I said not to expect appearances from characters in the series other than mentions so I don't ruin the continuity and my story can continue on its own.
