ctrlatlwrite

Hey, 
          
          I hope you are doing well! I'ven't heard from you. I was looking forward to your views on my story. I have already posted a few new chapters in the past week.

ctrlatlwrite

@Olivia_Pinkstorm of course.
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Olivia_Pnkstrm

@ctrlatlwrite oh really? Im dorry for not checking in regularly!
            I sure will read and it would be really a treasure if you would read my story too-titled 'Happy-ness of 2 brides', which is basically about-2 besties who promised to never break the sis code ended up falling for eachother's brother'
            With love,
            Olivia✨
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lovxickgguk_

Hi! I just read your story, and I think it’s really fun and creative. I love the playful vibe you’re going for! You mentioned word count for your chapters, but honestly, I don’t think it matters too much how many words you write. What really counts is how you develop each scene and character, and I’m sure your writing will shine no matter the length. I just wanted to share a couple of small thoughts that might help make it even better. Maybe spacing out the dialogue a little more could make it easier to follow and help each moment stand out. Also, adding a bit more detail when describing actions could make the scenes feel more alive. For example, instead of saying ‘Y/N nodded her head like crazy,’ you could try describing how she froze or shook her head frantically, it really adds to the emotion of the moment. Your dialogue is already so fun, but tweaking it to sound a bit more natural could make the characters feel even more real. Overall, I really enjoyed reading the first chapter, and you’re doing an amazing job. I can’t wait to see how the story unfolds!  I'm sorry for being late to reply to you

Olivia_Pnkstrm

@lovxickgguk_ oh thank you soo much.. I was really devastated and did not want to upload any because i thought they were not good enough.. But now i know, i will!✨
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