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Way he could survive or something like that and Dani wouldn't be the one to judge he for his past but what he his now. 
          Anyway you story is fantastic and something that a lot of people would love to keep reading(>.<) I recommend reading one of Midnight_ Indigo stories, maybe by reading something of the same genre would give you more inspiration to write more. I hope this helps and good luck 

I agree with  kershy_LHS, you story freakin amazing so far don't give it up. The characters are developing all ready they just need a little push to become something more, like Sacchetti could have a shady past that fighting was the only 

Hey your book is amazing dont stop writing i just read it today if you need inspiration i think you should probably give the character a more innocent vibe but please so far its a amazing book dont stop writing..

Hope you update today I love your book

Maybe when you are done with you homework for school you should update that is if you are not tired

@WesleyStrombergsbae thank you for reading and voting on my story "His Baby" so far :)