happiIy
I do that when I re-read my chapters ahahaha
Like I'm perfectly okay when I write them, but then I read them later and I'm like "this is actually really embarrassing wow"
Ollieee
but it's more realistic than a lot of published books I read even. like, the begginning of a relationship IS awkward and uncomfortable and most guys aren't super suave they're super awkward especially with girls