Hey there fellow pals , @OmarAbdalall is an underrated author I discovered .
I'm writing the review after finishing part one of a really amazing story of Max and Allios and their journey . As a fictional reader I enjoyed it quiet well. It is a fictional story about superpowers and unity . I loved the emotional game in the ending . I even like how realistically he described people's feelings , how he wrote every bit just like a freakin Anime !
The story really Describes @OmarAbdalall wide imagination . There might be some of you out there who does not read fictional and can't go along with the flow because of the simple grammar issues . I noticed it too . I would really like it if you would correct the spelling mistakes and write the story in a more poetic form / any other form of writing .
Thank you ^_________^
