solialex_0909
hi can u please check out my book "This is me" and give me your feedback.
Omgnostalgia1
nuriyasarjis
https://my.w.tt/ogLv5hD3V7 Pls check it out if u could these is my daughters story
Omgnostalgia1
@nuriyasarjis so as it turns out, it didn't take me too long to read, so first i'd like to tell you that stories like these are not my type But with that being said, your daughters story has the right stuff, even though i don't like stories like this i couldn't stop reading I kept going from chapter to chapter and by the end of the day i was on chapter 44, so what I'm trying to say is that it keeps the reader interested and that is a great quality in a story It doesn't get boring and there's a situation at every turn, it's easy to understand and I'll keep reading on until i finish it
mikedisway
See something like this but post your own on bigger profiles and you will surely get more attention on your works
https://my.w.tt/pGd2sd7r54
EcchiWecchi
i just saw you video on yt XDD
and i'm interested in reading your stories-
but maybe when i'm not that busy
Omgnostalgia1
@KimKhyzenLee thanks for checking the video out, i have to warn you that my stories are all written in script, most people don't really like that format lol
melonsmeylin
hello there! i saw your youtube and decided to give your profile a look *frankly i've been bored so i will read some of your stories after my homework isn't as piled up XD* also i was wondering if you knew what exactly "Ranks" are because one of my stories got ranked anddd i'm very confused O~O
Omgnostalgia1
@Raydee_Meylin you're welcome, speaking of feedback I started reading "delirious" and I got to tell you I'm liking it, the way you describe things in detail is great, before I knew it I was already reading through all of it in 30 minutes, I think I've only got 3 chapters left to read lol
melonsmeylin
Ohhhh i get it now!^^ thank chuuuu! And i'll be sure to either message or comment feedback on what i read!!
Omgnostalgia1
@Raydee_Meylin thank you, I didn't think anyone saw my videos, I have to warn you that my stories might be difficult to follow since they're written in script and they're anime stories as well As for the ranking I'll try to explain, so when you publish a story there are tags that you can put that are associated with your story. every story on the site that has been put under that same tag all get a rank or a number, this puts your story on the list within the category, the lower the number the better the story, anyone can look at the list and find your story, the rank changes every week, if your story has multiple tags then it's possible to have multiple ranks, best of luck and thanks again, I'd appreciate some feedback on what you read or anything that might help me improve if you can and if not no worries
Be_passionate
Hello! I also entered a story into the Watties and I was wondering if you could give me any advice. My story is called The Twelve Kingdoms! Here is the description: Twelve different kingdoms, Twelve different types of people or so they thought. Each zodiac sign has its own kingdom. Families are being split apart and innocent lives are constantly being taken. King Vaughn of the Aries kingdom has started a war that he believes will lead to a revolution. Twelve Kingdoms, twelve different sides of the war. Who will come out on top?
Thank you and have a great day!
Omgnostalgia1
@Be_passionate I just finished the story, I thought it was great and the characters were well matched, I honestly thought Sebastian was going to be a villain or something lol, I hope to see more of your stories in the future, I honestly don't think there's any advice I can give you, the structure and way that it's written is amazing and I enjoyed every chapter
Omgnostalgia1
For those of you reading, I'm trying to find a way to make the story better and improve so please send me your feedback, your thoughts on how the story was, weather you like or hate it and why, thank you