OmnitrixHero

@JackobAckerman7 I'm working on Chapter 3, and though the Chapter I'm introducing your OC, and I was hoping to build ideas with you for her introduction, and ideas of what type of clothing she wears. Looking forward to cooperate with you

JacobAckerman7

Ok I feel like she’d wear black short shorts and a red crop top to show off her tattoo.
          	  And to top it off with some expensive shoes 
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JacobAckerman7

Hey ya never gave me a response. Do you wanna exchange numbers? I mean, we both like class of 09 and we both like Spider-Man. I just wanna talk you seem like an cool guy and I wanna see what else we have in common.

JacobAckerman7

I don’t post anything just so you know
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OmnitrixHero

@JacobAckerman7 well I don't do numbers... yet, but do you have an Instagram? We're we could chat
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JacobAckerman7

So when’s the next chapter going be out ?

JacobAckerman7

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@OmnitrixHero no don’t apologize your a human same as me you have your own life and shit 
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JacobAckerman7

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Btw I think I should just give you this idea of what I think would happen if Nicole,Emily and Blaze got jealous of some other girl talking to Ash tell me what you think
          
          Nicole- talks shit to Ash forcing him to come
          
          Emily- pulls Ash away and threatens to stab him
          
          Blaze- embarrasses Ash by talking about him being a Mommas boy or pantsing him

JacobAckerman7

Hey sorry if I’m being annoying but when are you gonna post the next chapter ?

OmnitrixHero

@JacobAckerman7 it's okay, but the next chapter will be on Friday/Saturday, because I'm almost done and adding up some finishing touches.
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JacobAckerman7

Here’s one more idea for a chapter you can use later on
          My idea is that the chapter can add depth to Ash and Emily it starts with a flashback where Emily is wearing a dirty hoodie and some baggy pants Emily herself is freaking out due to a bad high and just before she goes into a panic attack Ash comes to her side and claims her down leaving her with his number and some cash. Due to how different Emily looked and having her hoodie up Ash wouldn’t recognize her but Emily would recognize him when they start high school. She would get jealous of his friendship with Jecka and when she’s around Ash in school she acts the most insane to get his attention (stuff like throwing paper at the teacher, giving Jeffry a beating or swirly take your pick)

OmnitrixHero

@JacobAckerman7 I'll actually use it for Chapter four where (sneak peak) Ash is working on a new suit, but the entirety of the chapter will be Emily explaining her history with ash to nicole
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JacobAckerman7

Thnks so you’ll use it later on I guess?
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JacobAckerman7

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          Here’s a idea
          The chapter can start off with Nicole talking with ash about how he’s Spider-Man and with her agreeing to keep it a secret as it’ll do more harm than good if people find out her NEIGHBOR is spider man but she will tell home to give her 50 bucks or she will tell Jecka the rest of the chapter instead of having any spider man in this you can just introduce the OC and have all three girls and ash get together and get to know each other. With Emily and Nicole just talking shit to Ash and making fun of him and the OC questioning ash about himself finding him interesting

OmnitrixHero

@JackobAckerman7 I'm working on Chapter 3, and though the Chapter I'm introducing your OC, and I was hoping to build ideas with you for her introduction, and ideas of what type of clothing she wears. Looking forward to cooperate with you

JacobAckerman7

Ok I feel like she’d wear black short shorts and a red crop top to show off her tattoo.
            And to top it off with some expensive shoes 
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JacobAckerman7

Hey when’s the next chapter coming out?

JacobAckerman7

All right thanks for letting me know 
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OmnitrixHero

@JacobAckerman7 I'm almost finished with Chapter 2 and I'll work on Chapter 3
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OmnitrixHero

@JacobAckerman7 maybe tomorrow or Monday? Still working on Chapter 2 and balance my work, story, and taking care of my younger siblings
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