Josh

Yeah so Part 1 is done, and all the chapters have been updated with better grammar and junk. Enjoy or something.

Latest chapter updated for grammar by a friend.

This chapter is literally terrible. Kthanxbai.

@Omnivalence I'm writing a flashback scene right now too! And it's proving to be difficult, I need the flashback but it's proving to be very irritating. I'm sure you will get it written the way you want it, although I admit it sounds rather tricky. Just don't push yourself to the point where you are completely unsatisfied it's never worth it. 

@ElynRose95 Maybe. I'm just frustrated because it's sort of flashbacky and I have to cover a lot of ground but it has to be covered in such a way that you don't actually see that much of what's going on.

@Omnivalence Your opinion may change once you finish with it, as we discussed yesterday since that sometimes happens. But if you really don't like it don't force it. The chapter I'm writing right now, I never planned on writing and now my story is going on a different route but with the same ending.

@ElynRose95 I'm writing Chapter 8 right now, but it's kind of terrible.

@Omnivalence Oh, yeah that's true. Hopefully you do.

@ElynRose95 Yeah. Now lets see if I'll actually regularly update.

Thanks for fanning Josh(: I'm glad to see you posted your stories!