Onariba
Hey readers, don’t give up on me just yet, I recently moved countries and will get back on the book around this coming week.
Onariba
Onariba
Hiii, I’ve made a lot of plans for this books but I also want readers to have a say in what they wish to see in line with the story as tribute.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/410283169
sarahwilson_
Hey, *Can You Love Me?* feels really raw, the whole “one question changing everything” moment stood out to me. It’s simple but heavy at the same time. I’m curious, was that question always meant to be the turning point, or did it come naturally as their story unfolded?
Onariba
@Kalaniclark091 Right now, I haven’t reached any chapter that’s ultimately sad or aggravating but I think one theme that, I wouldn’t particularly term it ‘hard’ but it’s the theme of infidelity between two key characters. I haven’t written much but what do you think about the book so far, I genuinely enjoy and encourage any input whatsoever.
Kalaniclark091
@Onariba That actually makes it stronger, the fact it came naturally from everything they went through gives the question more weight. I like that it’s not just about love, but reflection and choice leading into the climax. Moments like that usually stay with readers longer. Which scene was the hardest for you to write?
Onariba
@sarahwilson_ it came naturally as a moment of decision from circumstances that both character grew to understand. The question is symbolic for reflection and their choice decides the very next climax. Hope this helps.