『Minaricano』

sooooo im trying to make a good MiChaeng story but i dunno if my story is good sooo~what should i add? is it too cringey? is it too mushy? give me some tips peeps

Read it if you love MiChaeng, 2yeon and SaTzu because YES.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/67243246

Lo mejor para los ONCEs/ The best for the Onces
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/162702314

The GREATEST story of my life, y'all should read it, betrayal, and like..yes, just read it 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/168044384