OnceUponMelanin

Going back and editing has been a trip because I get to connect this now expanding universe. It's also super odd because I was so young when I started this and have grown so much that some things I'm like gross I can't believe I wrote that. I strongly recommend rereading as I edit because more details have been added. No real changes that drastically alter the story, just details that needed to be added to improve the flow of them. The Rise has been retitled The Spark. Be on the look out for new updates!

theijxx

so excited!! 
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StephE73

I’m looking forward to reading the business series but hoping you finish editing the first book soon. I want to read in order. How come you took down the first unedited version? I would have read it and later read the edited version. Just excited to read it!

OnceUponMelanin

Thank you so much! I’m going to make it public again until I have time to edit it!
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HelenaGee3

Hi what order should these books be read in? As I began on number 1 first but book 2 jumps straight to Janae and Roman being married. 

OnceUponMelanin

The final order will be:
            The Spark
            Family Business (new title coming)
            Where Theres Smoke
            There’s Fire
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OnceUponMelanin

The Spark and The Family Business can read in either order at the moment. I’m in the process of  editing them, so you can read The Spark as I upload the edited chapters.  
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OnceUponMelanin

Going back and editing has been a trip because I get to connect this now expanding universe. It's also super odd because I was so young when I started this and have grown so much that some things I'm like gross I can't believe I wrote that. I strongly recommend rereading as I edit because more details have been added. No real changes that drastically alter the story, just details that needed to be added to improve the flow of them. The Rise has been retitled The Spark. Be on the look out for new updates!

theijxx

so excited!! 
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OnceUponMelanin

So the day has finally come where I now have time to edit my stories! I've reread all of them and know that stufff needs to be done. I also will be addressing some continuity issues that I noticed so they all will be coming down one by one. The first to be hidden for a bit will be The Rise. They will come back with a new covers and everything. They will be edited in the order they are intended to be read it. For those who are waitin on updates for Somewhere In Between also know they are coming! I am so excited to get the spark back in me to work on these!

Antoniacarvalhooo

Miss miss mis author.Girl I will say this I literally love love love you.I swear the best books o have ever read been mad at amd even cried . So many emotions . Girl keep writing like I swear to God you have talent like no joke. Can't wait for you to edit and actually publish and have your books on shelves and become hella rich . Don't forget you are an amazing person I swear your book made me feel like I was in it I feel experienced.  I might be sk young and saying this but I mean it best book I have ever read and I have read many . Funny enough your books are good even though they are not published.  You have a talent don't forget. What you have people pay to have it . Lol I kinda felt like your books were inspiring.  Love it keep up the good work   . 
          
          Love from a Stanger 
          

Antoniacarvalhooo

@OnceUponMelanin for sure I could never miss my favorite authors books.  
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OnceUponMelanin

@Antoniacarvalhooo You are so sweet! Thank you so much for taking interest in my stories that have been a labor of love and stick around for the ones to come.
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OnceUponMelanin

We are officially 4 chapters away from the end of Roman and Janaes portion of the Family Business Saga!! There will be a new story available the same day the final chapter drops. 

tommy59

Sad and happy. I hope they can get their $hit together; I want them to be together but only if they don’t destroy themselves and/or family. 
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DanielleNicole1988

I just read your bio and laughed. I know it'll get better but you got me feeling raw after this latest chapter.

DanielleNicole1988

@OnceUponMelanin I hope it gets better before it ends then  But for real, you've had me on an emotional rollercoaster the whole series. I just want my babies happy however that may be.
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OnceUponMelanin

It would be a shame if I mentioned that this story is nearing it’s end…
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