⟡ lizzie ⟡

@OneBaroqueGirl wow, this really shows you thought a lot about your characters on a much more personal level. Sometimes, as we grow up, we realize a lot of things about our characters or stories that were problematic or not explored well enough, in that case if you have the time to go through them over and rewrite, i wish you all the best for it ❤️

anyway, rant over!!! i’ll probably pop all of this into one of the stories 

I think that’s why trying to “fix” the relationship retroactively became so difficult. you can change dialogue, make him more self-aware, make her more assertive, redistribute emotional power in individual scenes — but when a relationship is fundamentally rooted in one person orbiting the other, those patterns don’t disappear cleanly. they linger underneath everything. I still understand why Auden loved him but now, when I reread it, I’m much more aware of how often I framed her endurance as romantic instead of tragic

@OneBaroqueGirl exactly, I am so tired of them

@OneBaroqueGirl its so annoying! I've been having that happen and I get so excited when I see I got a comment but then it's that

@OneBaroqueGirl it is  frustrating!

@sabrinahaines123 | hiya, i’m working on an update for immortals sons. been a bit hectic the last two weeks, but should be posting soon. I don’t have plans for a duke shelby book at the moment, but thanks for the kind words!

@OneBaroqueGirl   omg yay!! Your writing is so good, I’m totally hooked! But no worries if uploading doesn’t work out rn, I just needed that little bit of hope that we’d get to see what happens next lol

@_shaethomas | hello!! 100% yes. I have been editing the next chapter but got sidetracked with life — I will try positing it this week :) thx for reading x

@OneBaroqueGirl that's great! Happy New Year!