DeepMagic

iI didn't want to gunk up BrennaArbogast's comment thread with unnecessary comments, so I came here. I offered her help on some grammar flaws I saw and she shot me down. 
          
          Now, I am not sure if her last statement was a peacemaking one or not due to communication over internet, but I am going to tell you I was trying to help.
          
          You're right, I don't have to read it. However, the purpose of this site it to share what you have written and to get better as a writer. I was taking this site's purpose to heart and trying to help her, because if I hadn't, all of her comments would be praise telling her how cute the story is and how good of a writer she is.