Oni-cheese

Hey thank you for replying. First off you have to stop saying that you are bad at English .. you absolutely DO NOT. You write really good English. You don’t have to give me feedback. I just hope you have fun reading mine -that’s it. It has some 18+ content if that makes you uncomfortable I’ll let you know the chapters you can skip. I love love ace too but I’m heavily Zoro biased lolll. I’ll start reading your book today after work!! 

@ZoroslilPrincess I would love to do that, but uh. 
            
            I suck. 
            
            My first language isn't English, and I literally learned 94% of what I can of it from the internet. So, I'm unaware of grammar rules, and just write. 
            
            If I like the story, then I don't care how it's written. Stuff doesn't really bother me either. Like, when people write orbs instead of eyes. I know there's people who just straight up abandon the story if they find "and his orbs looked into mine." But that's also like the only thing I know. ☹️ Except also that some people hate Y/n. But I wanna use it! It's simple.
            
            I think of Ace 97% of the day, so I come up with a lot of stories for him. I love to find a good story about him. This is why I started publishing, simply because I figured people would also like to read about him. Maybe not the best grammar, but a good story. My writing is with other words, just a hobby. Also, my writing is often written when I'm half asleep or awake. So I'm aware it's not good. 
            
            In other words, I don't think I can give you feedback. But I wouldn't mind getting feedback from you. I would love to talk about just one piece and not include our stories. But I will read yours.

@DayaniraRomanVega I don't think so, but maybe. If I watch the movies again (which I will), then I will most likely come up with something.

Maybe one day. But I am drowning myself in the One piece universe at the moment so probably not.

Sorry, I was working on it and accedently posted it. 

Yes! Sorry for replying so late.

Do you mean, the Floyd x Y/n? Fanfiction?

@ Rukia_Abarai157  Nope