OnlyAshley

hello there, let's see if i can get back into typing out some words?!

idielopez

I love your profile picture! So beautiful!

OnlyAshley

@idielopez I support that idea- it's pretty nice in some places. Like you said, I would go north. There's the sand dunes, Mackinac Island, and a lot of different lakes to visit. There's also a few nice cities around, too. Honestly, I don't think I've traveled around Michigan enough to really recommend anywhere amazing, though lol
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idielopez

Wow, seriously pretty close!  Super cool :)  
            I've been wanting to visit northern Michigan/Wisconsin because of how beautiful the lakes are up there! 
            Any places you'd recommend in Michigan?
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OnlyAshley

@idielopez Oh nice! I'm from Michigan! You're pretty close lol
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PlumpySmile

You wanna know where I'm on vacation? South Carolina. I'm totally in danger of being wiped out by Irma. The hotel is kicking us out because of the evacuation order and we're gonna hide out at my grandparents tiny basement less house. Yeah, we've got it good.

PlumpySmile

Oh, yeah. Nuclear warfare all the way.
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OnlyAshley

@PlumpySmile We need some nuclear warfare first, I think
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PlumpySmile

The zombie apocalypse, duh!
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PlumpySmile

Wow! I didn't know you lived in Michigan! Actually, I do too! But right now I'm on vacation. Did your location always say that? I must be going blind, haha.

PlumpySmile

 It's okay, I'm around Ann Arbor, at the base of the thumb.
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OnlyAshley

@PlumpySmile oh what a coincidence! It's said that since I started here, but that's okay. Sometimes we overlook certain things, it happens. Where about are you in Michigan? (If you don't want to tell me it's fine, no pressure lol :D)
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PlumpySmile

Wow, your writing is amazing! Project: Haven seems really deep, and it has a lot of potential! I love how you actually make an attempt to write like a writer, unlike all those hot listers who capitalize random words in the middle of their sentences and who seriously need a bigger vocabulary.

OnlyAshley

@PlumpySmile Hey, thank you so much! I appreciate your feed back! How nice of you to say that! My golly, I cannot tell you how much that sort of writing irritates me, but that's another conversation for another time.
            
            As far as your suggestions go- thank you! I couldn't agree more. To be honest, the description was just a part of the story I decided to put at the beginning instead. Trust me, I will definitely change it in time. I sort of hate it- though I do intend to keep it as it is, in the sense of giving too much away. That part of the story is what happened in the past, which is the "end" of the world. There's no big secret about what happened. Actually, there's quite a few, but that's for later. :)
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PlumpySmile

However, I'm not being mean, I'm just making a suggestion. I think Project: Haven could be a little more understandable if the story description...
            
            1. Didn't give so much away.
            2. Asked cliffhanger questions like, "When Bob's best friend Fred dies, what will Bob do?"
            3. Flowed a little bit better.
            
            But then again, what do I know.
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