Onyx_Orion

My 4th story "BLAZE" has also been recently removed, so... there's that... And maybe it's just a matter of time before all of them gets removed after being published here for a while now... it's just sad... 

riacayubit

Hi,
          I like the first book "ignited" but the rest were a mess. It was so confusing to the point that i don't want to continue reading. I love the plot though. Keep writing hun. Good luck.
          Regards,
          Ria

riacayubit

@Onyx_Orion oh no hun. No need. I was able to follow the story, what i mean is readers might get confused since the story had a lot of flashbacks. Anyway, i appreciate ur willingness to learn. Keep that mind set hun. U'll succeed if u keep it up.
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Onyx_Orion

Hi @riacayubit Thank you for reading my stories. I hope I can enlighten you about said confusion on the story. And it would also help me a lot as a writer to improve my work. If you could pinpoint to me the details, I'll be more than happy to hear it.
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ericstars

Love reading your stories so much ♥️♥️ 

ericstars

@ericstars it's completely okay I really don't mind, I just like to encourage everyone who write amazing stories.keep writing  I will be waiting for your stories ☺️
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Onyx_Orion

@ericstars Thank you! I appreciate it. Sorry for the late response though. I only saw your message now. But thanks a lot, really. It means the world to me.
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