@HopeYouAreHappier I believe romanticizing the type of abuse in you novel is most distasteful. I was waiting for any type of character development from anyone and never found it. The plot was non dynamic, flat and one tone throughout the entire story. I will say, the punctuation and grammar were decent enough. Please believe me when I say, I’m not mean or even a harsh critic. I never left a negative comment on a story prior to this. Your story left me with the worst feeling. An author has no responsibility for readers feelings, but I believe that is was separates a great story from trash, an author accountability. It’s hard to decipher the difference, especially on the app. So the comment section helps future readers ♀️
