Hey there! I stumbled upon your account while I was looking for new books to read. And your book is very interesting and your writing style is really good, but I noticed it hasn't gotten the reads it deserved. It deserves so much more to be honest :)
Though I will tell you this: You should make spacing for every paragraph so it's a lot easier to read. Second, your chapters are a bit too long. I suggest try making your chapters 1000-2000 word count limit.
And a tip for getting more readers is to read other people's stories too, and engage with them :D
Best of luck to your writing! ❤
