Rhea

hay do you know anyone that can edit also any one who can do covers

New part in Trapped in 'The Game' (well more re-write of the intro), if you could let me know which you prefer, it'd be appreciated. Thanks. Also constructive criticism and comments are always welcome.

If you notice anything with anything I've posted, please feel free to put a message on the piece

Mwhaha, first follower :P